Unbroken - Comments

updatify this, lol

Just looking for a new story to read, this one caught my eye. Love it so far!♥ update?!

I can't wait for the next chapter(: I thought it was really good!

Okay soooo yah it took me a long time to comment. I suck at this stuff so i'm sorry Jess! hahaha.
But yeah it was as amazing as i expected it to be. I liked how you opened up with a description of Jimmy. It makes you feel as if you know the character before you actually know them. Of course it's an insight and he will developed further later on.

I also love Matt and Nina... can I sense a relationship forming later on? =D

I'll admit, I usually think stories like this are really overrated. But this one caught me when you started describing characters. I'm very much intrigued by Nina and Matt and their antics, but it's not like other stories where you'd read that and go 'Oh look, they're ovbiously going to end up with each other.' It's not obvious, and it's not for sure about James and Andrea either. Thanks for keeping me guessing!

First of all, I think you have a lovely writing style, it makes your writing really nice to read. I also love the characterisation because it felt really, idk, fresh? Something like that at least, I’m not to good at putting my meanings into words :3 I also really like the descriptive bits, because they’re very well written. All in all I really enjoyed reading this.

This sounds real good! Im excited and looking forward to the next update!!

more soon please! this is awesome so far.

Awesome, just as I'd thought it would be. If that was only the first chapter then I can't fucking wait or you to write more. I love the whole thing with Matt and Nina, its a really good sort of (friend) relationship to have in the story, it just adds to the plot. Urgh! Write more woman~
Well, please write more.
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Another amazing story by the amazing Jessica. I love it already! I love the way that Nina tortures Matt, and how I think she obviously has a thing for him. It's also cool how you made Andy's personality. It meshes well with her best friend's, and I can tell that she's going to be a fun character to get to know. I also have a setting for this in my head already, for some reason. It somehow brings to mind my English room from North Dakota, and my least favorite teacher, Mrs. Dahl. Ironic how there's only a few letters separating Dyal's and Dahl's names. And Jimmy. His personality so far matches his real life personality, I think. ^_^ I could definitely see him saying those types of things in school, to a teacher. And I get the intimidation thing, too. It wasn't how he looked, or acted it was something in his eyes, I think. But nonetheless, I love the character you've started him out to be. And Mattie, too. I love how you made him have such an adorable personality. I CAN'T WAIT FOR ANOTHER UPDATE. [/randomhyperness]
I'll end this novel of a comment now, and simply say that it was an amazing chapter. ^_^

love it
XD
update soon

Wow, I can't wait for you to put the first chapter up of this story.... It's gonna be EPIC!
I can just tell....
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So yeah first comment even though there are no chapters up
No matter what I am now first for this story. Just letting you know that I can't wait to see this story =]