November 21st, 2010 at 04:15pm
This is so beautiful.
The emotion at the end makes my eyes swell up because it's so romantic and perfect <3 <3
The only thing I will criticize this piece on is the opening of the main character introducing herself but, other than that, I loved the piece to bits!
I really liked the whole idea of it, it was really creative. The ending was unexpected (for me, anyway) so bravo. ^__^
The only thing I'm kind of 'ehh' on is the beginning. I normally don't like it when people introduce their main characters in the introduction, to me it just seems kind of cliche.
But overall, great job! <3