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  • brebre251

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    I think you should make it a story. :)
    July 13th, 2011 at 01:21am
  • colibri

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    Awh. This was adorable! I loved it. The writing was good and it was very simplistic.
    I agree with Jackasaurus Rex. This should be a story. I'd read it, most definitely.

    Have a lovely day.
    April 7th, 2011 at 02:56am
  • Jackasaurus Rex

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    That was legitimately the cutest thing ever! I loved it so much and I don't think it needed anything else added to it. It was perfect in it's simplicity. I'm glad you posted the comment swap journal because without it I wouldn't have gotten to read this. And I totally think it should be a story if you ever feel so inclined to make it one.

    xoxoxo
    November 18th, 2010 at 12:40am
  • tyranicholle

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    Well thank youzz!
    Wellll, it's for a drabble contest, so it would've been too long.
    Hahah.
    Trust me, I would've like to.
    November 17th, 2010 at 02:54am
  • Ooooh shizz I jizzed

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    This was sweeeet (:
    I just wish we had some background info on them, like their ages. But I like how you write(:
    November 17th, 2010 at 02:50am
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