Wow, so you haven't updated this since last year but I'm holding out hope that you will continue on in the hopes of becoming America's Next Top Fan Fiction Writer. Great show. You should watch it, if you've never seen it.
Aside from my dumb jokes, I'm so intrigued by this story. I was hoping that Jonathan would come more into play before I got to the last update. I was hoping for maybe a chapter in his point of view. See what's going on in his head and why he was acting the way he was before. I thought he just saying he thought something was there was odd because it was pretty one sided. My theory is that his friends put him up to it. And I love your main character. I think she is a strong, independent, fierce female and I love reading about all her cupcakes and stuff. Sasha seems adorable too! And her friend is one of a kind!
Please update if you can. And if you're not going too, could you just let me know? Thank you :)
I just found this, & I'm sucked in! My guess for who's in the shop would be Max because of her response. However, it very well could be Jonathan, too. Can't wait for more!!