When It All Comes Down - Comments

Eh. Hayley needs to start talking to Lyric again. Ha-ha. :) Good chapter! Can't wait for another update.

I kind of cheered a little bit when Lyric said no to Allison. Is that mean? Oh, well. Ha-ha. Update as soon as you can, 'cause your author's note made me really curious. :)

I just started reading this story today and I totally love it. I hope to read more soon, but the chapters make me want to cry. :D

Aww. This part was cute and sad all at the same time. Can't wait for the next update!

This story is awesome! :D I love it. Keep up the amazingness.

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love it!! can't wait for more xD

This story is sincere and it really brings out the seperate charaters to light. I think you do have to slow it down just a bit. The last sentance: " From that day on, Lyric Oleander became Hailey's best friend. "
It gives to much information. You should lead onto the fact that she still wants to be alone. But is somewhat willing to be with Lyric. The last sentance for me theorizes that she was okay with making a new friend and her sister's death was forgotten.
So i do think your going in to fast. Slow down and think more about Hailey's feelings and Lyric's adamant attitude to help her.

Overall this is an amazing story. One of the few original stores on mibba Im actually waiting for an update from. Hope I helped :)

I love SixBillionSecrets :D
Anyways, poor her. D:
Can't wait for the next update :D

OMG.
Love the fact she's a Harry Potter nerd!
Love your new chapter. Thanks for updateing so soon.:)

Love you story so far.
Update soon please!

love it write moree plzz!!!!