The Slave Trade - Comments

lol! natalayy, i totally agree with you, carter is my fav character to write about XD i will try my best to get another chapter out, but my rents took my comp because of something stupid i did :P ill try to post soon though!

Ohmylanta I AM IN LOVE. This is a FANFREAKINTASTIC story, and I'm kinda sorta legitimately OBSESSED with Carter. Just for the record =) PLEASE keep writing this is EXCELLENT.

Very good so far and interesting :)

It'll be out in moments :)

AHHHH. I'm in LOVE with this story and I'm dying for an update... Please do it soon-ish =)

thank you so much!

GREAT story. I only read chapter 1 so far, but I HAD to stop and comment. By the way, the layout is absolutely gorgeous.

thank you!

Great plot, good detail. Tip: Never put song lyrics in stories. It will appeal to those who know the song, but people who don't will skip right over it. Just a space waster. I like the story so far, though.

im glad your telling me!

i love the chapters!!!!

thank you!

i like your story!! keep writing!!

thank you!

Wow a very interisting story good :)

yea! thanks you so much! i will start putting the actual meanings at the bottom!

AMAZING story so far, I love the detail you put into everything.... you know what would make it better (In my opinion) is when you put the spells in a different language... say what they are in English at the end, thats just my opinion though :) Great start please carry on with the story :D x