Stuck in the Moment. Dead at the Scene. - Comments

Thirty: Short, but great though. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

twenty-nine: Forgot to mention that I'm glad that Barbie got what she did. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait to read and find out.

twenty-eight: Hating Barbie even more now. Wondering what is her dad going to say? What's so important that her mom has to tell her? Can't wait to read and find out.

twenty-seven: Loved her tattoo. I'll send some of my ideas to you; if that's fine. Wondering what is going to happen next? Can't wait to read and find out.

twenty-six: Already can tell that I'm going to hate the barbie; if she's in the story more. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait to read and find out.

twenty-five: Another beyond awesome chapter. Great New Year's Eve scene. Descriptions were great. Loved her outfit. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait to find out.

twenty-four: Cuteness. Never seen that movie though. Can't wait to read what happens next.

twenty-three: So where did Sophie disappear to? What's going on at her dad's place? Can't wait to read and find out.

twenty-two: Loving that car. Although I'd probably have wanted it in silver. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait to read the next chapter.

twenty-one: Cuteness. Wondering what's going to happen next? Found a mistake, but I forgot where it was; so you might want to reread this chapter whenever you get the chance. I just don't want to find out that this was banned is all, seeing as I'm loving this more than anything and because it's the only Nick Simmons story that is actually really good.

twenty: Short, but awesome introduction of the world's hottest bad boy son. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait to read and find out.

nineteen: Loving it more and more. Found two mistakes this time: {I nodded and then when upstairs to get all of my shit.} Just when to went. The second one: {He laughed, "Okay, Corey and I are coming. Are still at baggage claim?"} Just put you in-between are and still and then put the in-between at and baggage. That about does it for that. On the story: WISHING I WAS HER RIGHT NOW! She got to ride in first class and meet Fall Out Boy. Wondering what is going to happen next? Can't wait to read and find out.

eighteen: Liked that she did that. Wondering what's going to happen next? By the way; saw the episode when he had those on his head *bg img* Can't wait to read what happens next.

seventeen: Forgot to mention that I'm not really liking Johnny. At the moment; not liking Reese for what she did either. Wondering what's going to happen between her dad and mom when she finds out about the early flight? What's going to happen in LA? Can't wait to read and find out.

sixteen: Another great chapter. Found something; nothing big though...{I don't if he's going to be pissed or not about me leaving.} Just place know in-between don't and if. Other than that; still love being addicted to this. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

fifteen: Cuteness. Found a small mistake {Well back Ms. Jansen." Mrs. Sanchez said as I walked into Spanish.} Just change well to welcome. Other than that; still love being addicted to this story. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait to read and find out.

fourteen: EXTREMELY SAD CHAPTER; BUT STILL GREAT. Descriptions of the emotion and everything else was perfection. Wondering what will happen next? Can't wait to read the next chapter.

thirteen: Still sad that her friend had to die. Wondering how the funeral is going to be. Can't wait to read the next chapter and find out.

twelve: Sad to read about her friend. Wondering what's she going to do now? Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Eleven: So what's going to happen next? What happened with her other friend; Johnny's daughter, sorry forgot the name. Can't wait to read the next chapter now.