This Is Our Pain of Love - Comments

Rath (100)

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I love it sooooooooooooooo much!
It's good.
:D

November 21st, 2011 at 10:55pm

Rath (100)

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I love it!
Stephanie can't die.
I'll cry.
:'(
Please update soon?!

June 2nd, 2011 at 05:19am

Rath (100)

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Love it!

April 4th, 2011 at 10:57pm

kyumi2 (155)

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More!

April 4th, 2011 at 01:06pm

I'm BORDERLINE (100)

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you are so talented sweetie!
Please continue to write, I just love it <3

January 23rd, 2011 at 12:05am

Nightmaire (100)

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It is good, but I say cut down a lilttle bit on the dialogue(talking) and put more details/action in the story if you are going to have the main characters fighting a lot. That will get you a lot of readers and maybe some more comments as well. -Cami

January 20th, 2011 at 03:59pm

Hustle . (100)

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Not to be mean or anything, but you should really improve your writing. Get the basics of writing a story, at least ! Because this is a really good story but it's hard to keep on with it, like, you write everything 'glued' together. you need to make paragraphs and whatnot.
so yeah...

January 19th, 2011 at 02:19am

Rath (100)

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I love it!
I hope that Tom stops being a bastard and they can finally be together.

January 19th, 2011 at 12:00am

kyumi2 (155)

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I'm so glad you updated! I love how Tom just came out of nowhere, but she beat his butt. Haha, please keep writing.

January 18th, 2011 at 02:12pm

SoccergirlBianca (100)

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oh my gosh i love this update
cant wait till next

December 26th, 2010 at 07:12am

mreesor77 (100)

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Awesome story, you rock at writing

December 23rd, 2010 at 06:51pm

Rath (100)

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I love it!
I need more!
now!
lol.

December 23rd, 2010 at 06:08am

SoccergirlBianca (100)

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great chapter

December 18th, 2010 at 07:28am

I'm BORDERLINE (100)

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more love, more drama XD more romance
please <3

December 6th, 2010 at 10:58pm

I'm BORDERLINE (100)

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this is the best fucking story i ever read.
please continue the story XD

December 6th, 2010 at 10:56pm

Rath (100)

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I love it!
I hope Tom realizes soon that he wants just her and not other girls. lol.
Please update soon?!

December 6th, 2010 at 01:38am

mreesor77 (100)

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Awesome story

December 6th, 2010 at 01:06am

Nightmaire (100)

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This is better than the prequal. I can't wait for more, shoot I might be able to get some ideas to make an ex that I still like jealous from this(this guy still has feelings for me but tries to hide it). This is amazing. I hope that you are going to put some more drama in it before having the first fight happen, like have her training day and night besides sleeping, sleaning up, and eating. That sounds good for this story so far in my opinion.

December 6th, 2010 at 12:55am

Rath (100)

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I love it and I love the prequel!
Update soon?!

November 29th, 2010 at 05:58am

lettettdid (100)

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love it i want more

November 24th, 2010 at 08:21pm