Masquerade - Comments

  • heretic.

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    This is so good!

    I don't think I've ever read a story quite like this, it was so romantic! The fact that they were always meant to be together, falling in love with each other over and over again throughout the decades is seriously making me swoon!

    Really well written, I could picture it all happening in my head so perfectly!

    A handsome man, hair slicked back. Suit dark, eyes brown. Gorgeous smile, charming laugh. His hands, long and talented clutching at taffeta and silk and beads. I really really liked this line, so poetic and beautiful!

    Awesome story!
    November 3rd, 2013 at 03:46pm
  • calousedheart

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    I love this story! omg, so great! <3
    April 16th, 2013 at 11:03am
  • shortygirl

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    I've never read a story quite like this. It's amazing and very intersting. I love how there always meant to love each other and find each other.
    April 15th, 2013 at 06:52am
  • purple89

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    this was really good! reminds me of the Fallen series by Lauren Kate. the way they were always meant to find each other through each lifetime. great work!
    April 15th, 2013 at 01:56am
  • CourageKeeper

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    I can honestly say I've never read a story quite like this before.
    So be very proud of this!
    March 20th, 2012 at 07:27am
  • CourageKeeper

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    OH MY FUCKING (johnny) CHRIST!

    This was amazing and intense and incredible and all of those other glorious words that describe how much I love this (:
    <33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
    March 20th, 2012 at 07:26am
  • Nia_Flores

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    I don't know why it took me 2 fucking years to find this, but I loved every single word of it! Such greatness & such original plot! I loved it!
    March 6th, 2012 at 06:55am
  • MochaXtacy

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    I loved it :)
    February 22nd, 2012 at 07:37am
  • R.I.O.T

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    OMG! This is the best thing ever! Amazing descriptions, characters and everything! OMG, I wished i read this sooner!
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    I'm even going to print it!
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    June 10th, 2011 at 01:42pm
  • D. Dixon

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    You are an amazing writer! Of the three I've read, this has to be my favorite, and it's so good! I loved this, and this would make an amazing full-length, if you ever thought about that. :]
    May 1st, 2011 at 04:38pm
  • justhannah;

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    This was really effin good. <3
    December 31st, 2010 at 04:46am
  • Tilers Haner

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    Loved it <3
    December 29th, 2010 at 04:10pm
  • Music...and...Poetry

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    :O THAT WAS SOOOO AMAZINGLY GREAT!!!!!
    I loved the plot and how well-written it was!
    Did I mention how amazing it was, because it was!
    =)
    December 20th, 2010 at 09:31am
  • HurricaneTaylor

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    Oh. My. God.
    i fucking love this!!
    I think reincarnation is amazing & i kinda sorta believe in it :)
    December 19th, 2010 at 09:05pm
  • CharmedLuna

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    This was so awesome.I really enjoyed reading this. I didn't want it to end :( Great job!
    December 19th, 2010 at 09:00am
  • winter soldier

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    I FUCKING HATE YOU AND LOVE YOU AT THE SAME TIME(: Loved it! :D <33
    December 19th, 2010 at 06:11am
  • HailMisery

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    OMG THIS WAS SO AWESOME, AMAZING, UNIQUE.... I love it:DDD

    WORDS CAN'T DESCRIBE THIS
    December 19th, 2010 at 05:17am
  • Liz Mayhem :D

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    <3 I loooved it! You just needa be quiet about not liking because it was lovely (:
    December 19th, 2010 at 05:16am
  • kultaseni

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    HOW COULD YOU NOT LIKE THIS STORY?!?!?
    I FUCKING LOVE IT!!!
    I just went awwww and eeeee and yayyyyy and awwwww!!!
    <3 <3 <3 AMAZING!
    I love the plot and how you played it out...le sigh.
    Why can't I have something like this? <3
    December 19th, 2010 at 03:40am