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  • Jack.Barakatt

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    i'd like to know where the rest of the chapter went. -.- that was way too short, i need moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
    August 31st, 2011 at 09:02pm
  • Jack.Barakatt

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    Dude, this needs an update. Now. Like, right now. I love this :') so um. Yeah. Or I'll hunt ya down. ;D
    August 31st, 2011 at 04:59am
  • Jack.Barakatt

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    This is really amazing <3
    Is there more? :']
    April 19th, 2011 at 09:31pm
  • Divide the Joy

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    Oh and btw where ever did you get the beautiful picture from?
    January 31st, 2011 at 05:43pm
  • Divide the Joy

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    I like it but I'm confused about a couple of things.

    In the first chapter didn't they get into a cab?
    Also whose POV is this because you say I and then her and then Kathy. You keep switching point of views?

    And no offense but the sentences sound weird to me like someone is reading really fast. I guess it is because they kind of all start the same kind of like a list.
    January 31st, 2011 at 05:41pm
  • kaul hilo

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    This is awesome, really, really nice.
    Sheehan rings a bell ;)
    January 31st, 2011 at 05:36pm
  • kaul hilo

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    That was cool, and sad :(
    I want more :D
    November 20th, 2010 at 09:39pm