i'd like to know where the rest of the chapter went. -.- that was way too short, i need moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
I like it but I'm confused about a couple of things.
In the first chapter didn't they get into a cab? Also whose POV is this because you say I and then her and then Kathy. You keep switching point of views?
And no offense but the sentences sound weird to me like someone is reading really fast. I guess it is because they kind of all start the same kind of like a list.