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  • Michael James Way.

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    I like the premise, but there are so many formatting errors as well as gramatical errors. I understand, I was the same way when I was new to mibba. Try reading a few other people's stories (slightly pimping my own), and see how they format their work.

    If you take the initiative to learn, I have no doubt that you'll be a great author! :)
    December 13th, 2010 at 04:22am
  • mikeystruelove

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    I am in the midst of trying something a lil different one of my stories I update in the morning and the rest at night, so I'm working my way to updating this one just don't know if you all deem it worthy:'(
    November 24th, 2010 at 01:45am
  • xoxo1alyssa1xoxo

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    update please
    November 23rd, 2010 at 10:59pm
  • mikeystruelove

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    Would some one plz tell me how on a bb can you do paragraphs, my laptop is infected! Nasty virus that one of my sons let in! I'm gonna be phonin it for a while to give u what u need!love youse all!<333
    November 23rd, 2010 at 05:33am
  • mikeystruelove

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    @Hundefot. Thanks,sweetie! I will try that I'm just so new to mibba and I promise a new post tomorrow, I have a presentation due in the morning and after that I'm on it thanks to u!<3
    November 22nd, 2010 at 09:20am
  • Hundefot.

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    Interesting story. I personally aren't a big fan of waycest, but you wrote it good. Try writing in paragraphs; that way it's easier to read :-)

    Hugs
    November 22nd, 2010 at 12:01am
  • mikeystruelove

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    Oh okay thanks i had no idea and the title is wrong that goes to another story! help
    November 21st, 2010 at 03:08am
  • Lexington.

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    It's in all caps. That, is a no no.
    November 21st, 2010 at 03:06am
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