Contest comment. I liked the short sentences in this drabble, though I thought maybe a few would've been made a little longer. You've written good detail and were very descriptive about the scene. :) You could just imagine the things written in your head. :) Good job.
I liked the short sentences in this drabble, though I thought maybe a few would've been made a little longer. You've written good detail and were very descriptive about the scene. :) You could just imagine the things written in your head. :) Good job.