Ahh! Total love. This chapter made me feel so many emotions that I thought I was on some sort of crazy roller coaster.
Anyway, I loved everything. And I think you did an excellent job on the make-out scenes, going into just enough detail to let us know what was happening, but not so much detail that I got turned-off. It's a delicate balance, and you certainly achieved it.
And I totally loved how Fitz mentioned Adam and how they could be friends and just YES. Total awesomeness. It makes me a happy camper.
But Fitz got stabbed. :( The hospital scenes were sad, and I had a feeling he'd make it (or at least I really hoped he would), but they were still kind of intense. And I LOVED how Owen tackled Tyler. I would be lying if I said I didn't picture that a million times and get teary-eyed laughing at it. It's great that you used Owen at all, since I feel like he's not used as much as he should. I totally adore his character.
And because I'm in a rambly mood, you just got a novel instead of a comment. But, in short, this chapter was fantastic and I can't wait to read more!
As always, a super fantastic chapter. :D I was hardcore squealing when Fitz asked Hollie to be his girlfriend. Too great. And I had so much hope when Adam and Fitz were hanging out that they'd get along... *sigh*.
Oh my Goddd! The chapter was amazing. :D I absolutely love the chemistry between Fitz and Hollie. I can't wait to find out how Fitz and Adam end up working. Ha-ha.
Amazing update! I really loved it. And I'm choosing to believe Fitz for now...we'll see how long that lasts. He's being so nice to Hollie...how could I not buy it for now? Ha-ha. And OH MY GOD. Marcie makes me want to chuck her out a window. :/ But anyway, yeah, looooved the chapter and I can't wait for more! :D
:) Loved the update. Clare and Eli are the most adorable couple in the world, at least I think so. :D Ha-ha. And I really like your story layout too. Keep it up!