Purest Silver - Comments

i like it =)
nice description =)
waiting for a new chapter =)
maybe you could write it just for me lol. hope its good ^_*
Reilly

firstly with a prologue it usually make people weary of a story and where it is meant to go, but if you were to write a first chapter that might get a reaction

so if you choose to write that first chap then make it sound interesting, make it an in-action one, like you can so imagine that happening, plus this sounds sorta like a book series call Night World and if you have read them then make the 1st chap kinda like their's interesting and to the point!

hope to see a first chapter!