A List of Best Intentions - Comments

  • Blake_Degray

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    Hello! My name is Blake and I am from Comment Swap. I clicked on your story and I was like, "Whoa, that's a cool title so this is going to be a good story." And I was not disappointed. Although at the begging of the story I was a bit confused, I caught up very quickly. I love the layout, I love everything. I'm going to read more now :)
    Blake xx
    January 19th, 2015 at 02:56am
  • humanik

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    Great story.
    August 21st, 2014 at 05:12pm
  • FallynAngel16

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    I love Kevin's determination in trying to make the list happen
    July 5th, 2014 at 09:58pm
  • FallynAngel16

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    This an excellent start I mean I just started reading it and I'm already hooked I'm anxious to get to know the guy
    July 5th, 2014 at 09:52pm
  • FallynAngel16

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    Wow I'm completely speechless it was incredible
    September 8th, 2013 at 01:49am
  • ElloHarley

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    I wasn't expecting to think this story as much as I did and it's beyond me why so few have commented. Anyway, I've recommended this story just because I think it should be read by everyone in their lifetime.
    April 5th, 2013 at 06:46pm
  • PineappleScream275

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    This story was absolutely amazing!! You had incredible detail in it and you were able to tell a believable story, with all the plot turns and emotions and basically everything. :)
    You had me totally hooked from the beginning, and I don't usually read het. I'm very glad I found this story for if I didn't, I would've missed out something wonderful and totally unique. Actually. I'm amazed that so few have read this and commented. This definitely is worth more appreciation than it has gotten.
    I loved reading your story. Thank you for coming up with this. :)
    January 17th, 2013 at 03:33pm
  • aalliinnaaaaa

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    I don't know what to say except that I have enjoyed reading.
    Thank you for writing this story.
    May 29th, 2011 at 08:17am
  • loverfayce.

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    OH MY GOD.
    WHAT THE HELL.
    I DID NOOOT SEE THAT COMING.
    Jesus, Kevin in jail?! Or juvie??? WOW. that's just something i cannot picture. He's gonna get his ass kicked. And Cody!!! Ahhh this is getting intense. I loved Kevin's emotions in this chapter, you did a good job of showing them. I'm so excited for more.
    March 31st, 2011 at 05:44am
  • loverfayce.

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    :D You're so nice.

    So basically what I liked about this chapter is how when Kevin gets annoyed, there's sooo much more swearing in the narrative. I don't know why, but I think it's really funny. Kevin swearing seems funny somehow.
    I WANNA SEE THIS MOVIE. CAN I BE PART OF THE GUILD?

    Oh and PS, about that budding romance... not as romantic as ya think. [/hinthint]
    For now at least.
    March 10th, 2011 at 06:02am
  • loverfayce.

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    Oh my God, how do you come up with this stuff?! That chapter was hilarious! God, Kevin gets himself into the craziest stuff... the best thing about this is the people are so larger-than-life, but so realistic at the same time. It's like a sitcom. Or a comic book! Ha, I could totally see you writing one of those one day.

    So I just wanted to let you know, yet again, that I love this and it's amazing and my mind's being blown across the walls at how no one seems to be commenting on this...? Anyways, I put a link in an author's note of Spun Down so uh... not really sure it'll do anything whatsoever, but I really really hope it does!
    March 7th, 2011 at 07:21am
  • loverfayce.

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    So have I told you recently how much I love this?
    I love this.
    It should have more comments, it's one of the best (and most frequently updated) stories on here. Keep it up. (:

    I LOVE HOW KEVIN TALKS. I just can't get over it. He's such a sweetheart!
    December 24th, 2010 at 03:33am
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    Hello!
    I really love your story. It reminds me of a Ned Vizzini story, to be honest.
    The plot is really original, and the characters are captivating. I couldn't stop reading it! I truly can't believe more people haven't subscribed, if there are only. 2 (now 3), because it deserves more!
    Can't wait for more chapters!
    November 25th, 2010 at 09:00am
  • loverfayce.

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    Aw hi. You're awesome too. (:
    Wow, I even got your comment virginity and everything. I would've commented sooner if I knew... Apologies if this comment doesn't really make any sense. It's like one in the morning right now. But here, I'll try to say something substantial. I LOVE how Kevin And Cody talk. Thu sound like such sweethearts. I dunno I just sort of picture the way the talk as innocent I guess. And Kevin is hilarious. I love his narration. I just love most things about this to be honest.
    November 25th, 2010 at 08:31am