Bird Trapped in a Cage - Comments

This is such an amazing story that was beautifully written. It had many emotions that I felt throughout the eyes of the narrator. First, the feeling of wanting someone so bad, loving someone and not being able to show the world about it. It's normal for woman to be insecure just like the narrator was because of the way she was raised.

I felt so proud of her after she decided to do something about it. Showing her lover how much she really meant for her, in that way, was perfect. I loved this story so much because it is very realistic. The words connected perfectly. The layout is simple yet sweet.

Overall, this is a great story and it shows how an amazing writer you are.

This is such a beautiful story. The best femmeslash one shot I've read to be honest.
It was just perfectly said and I loved it <3
Well Done :D

Wow Yas... you can really feel the passion you feel for love in this. Not gay love or straight love just... love. It was beautiful and it is one of my favorite one shots, next to the one you wrote for me! It's great, well done. [:

Damn, this was good too.
I could really sense the emotion you put into it.
Keep it up girlie! :)

Wow . . . I loved it!
Don't be afraid to ask me to read anything.
I really enjoyed reading it!

I loved it.
Even though it's far from what I read or write, I really loved it.
It was really cute <3

I know this may seem completely different to what I normally write but I had a blast while writing.

I believe that love is Love
We all find some to love, it shouldn't matter what sex you are.
Love is being happy!

So what if a girl makes you happy.

Fingers corssed I do well with this, first Mibba contest (: