January 13th, 2011 at 07:53pm
This was amazing and heartbreaking.
I found myself wishing there was a little more buildup in the beginning, but I got over it. Obviously, by your detail distrubiting, the point of this wasn't meant for the beginning, but more or less, the end and strining questions. I really, really loved this even if it was sad. It fit the banner perfectly and it's a really unique idea. (:
Honestly, and oddly, I've never read a story that described CPR, aha.
It was a nice change of pace. :)
<3
I loved it :D