It's nice to read a story where Ovi isn't an absent minded douche. lol I like it. This chapter was a great way to bring Alex back and I liked how you wrote his point of view. Keep writing! :)
Wow. I'm an OV fan, so I obviously hate Sid the Kid, but you make it seem like he was actually dying. I wouldn't want to wish this on anyone. I'm subscribing, and waiting for when Ove shows up and starts playing hockey with Sid's Kid.
Oh my God, this is story is depressing. I really do dislike Crosby, but not enough to wish him something this terrible (not that I'm saying you are). Jeez oh peets... Keep writing.
This story is so sad. but its so well written!!!! I can't wait for more!!! Keep up the good work. ( I have to overlook the fact that Ovie is involved though..... =( not my favorite player but its still a really good story. )