I greatly applaud you. I'm from Huntington Beach and moved to just outside Atlanta. You even got the 714 area code right. Are you from Cali or did you do your research?
For some reason I've missed three chapters...my notifications must be messed up or something. But awh, poor Alli for being confused and all. Yay for Craig being there and making her happy. Good job Zack for being alright and talking to Craig. Props to Gates for being the man haha I love this story :)
I loved this story so much though.
Awh the ending :)