We're Writing Our Own Rules - Comments

Damn it Dan! Him and Jeremy won't last long if this keeps on going on...
See i think Dan still can't accept Nate and Ash...

More soon please?

god don't let this end them, that would be horrible

(I'm pretending Dan's full name is Daniel. Because I can't portray anger effectively with just Dan)
DANIEL. FUCKING. MCKERRAL.
THAT WAS A VERY MEAN THING TO DO.
AND NATE WILL KILL YOU IF YOU TRIED THERE AGAIN.
GO BACK TO ADORABLE JEREMY AND APOLIGIZE.
BECAUSE YOU'RE BEING A DICK.
-sincerely,
Paige.

more soon? (:

-i'm not sure who i want to kill more, dan or jeremey. >.<

O:
HAPPY ENDING!
HAPPY ENDING.
D: D:
i really dont like non happy endings.

the both of them ending up alone would not be ideal

But... but!!! but BUT BUT!!!
They're soo cute!! Why??? Why why why??? ":(
AHH!!! that just wasn't nice.. And even though Dan was out of line, Jeremy should have waited a minute. He'll come around on his own time. Sometimes it just takes a while... :( Poor things. :(
I hope that Jeremy is okay though. Poor dear.

I LIED.
I DON'T WANT IT TO BE THIS WAY ANYMORE.
-sobs-
NOOOOO.
DAN! HOW COULD YOU!?
D':
-hugs jeremy-
You know, you shouldn't have pushed him. :\
But now you've learned your lesson never to do that to him again,
cos if you do,
that's what happens.
Now when he comes back,
(he'd better, or I'll sock him good.)
you'd best apologize,
have angry make up sex,
and then marry Dan,
because you both need each other.
GOT IT!?
-cuddles jeremy-

AND YOU DAN.
THAT WAS TOTALLY UNCALLED FOR.
YOU KNOW WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT,
“That’s where you’re wrong. Ash and I have had sex, and he fucking screamed my name,” I said coldly, a mocking smile on my lips.
Alright dickweed,
you'd best come back around and apologize.
-scowls-
I HONESLTLY, don't think that this was Jeremy's fault.
AFTER ALL.
He IS your boyfriend,
and he deserves to know these things.
GOT IT!?
D:<

It sucked that they got interrupted. :(
Maybe next time? Maybe? I'm hopeful. Haha.
Good update. :)

Ahahahaha, of course.
Yay! Nate! :D I love him.
And this wedding planning Ash is pretty cute too.

-chapter not about them-

:3 Awh. Daaaan!
He almost got breakfast sex. Almost.
And yeah! I think he's right. They'll be good together.
Unless they break up.. meh.
I don't want this to be five chapters. :( I'm going to want more when it's gone!

DAMMIT.
YOUUUUU BITCHHHHHH.
D:<
x3333
I love you.
<333333333

Woop i'm glad there is still a bit of Nate and Ash in this ;)
I dunno though, i think Dan might be rushing things with Jeremy already moving in together and what not...i dunno it just seems to quick...

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AHH!!! cock block much guys????
But Ash is just too cute!!! :D!!! Really? Who could possibly resist that???
That was beautiful by the way. I really like the pace actually. Normally I'd love more of a plot, but is just cut and dry. Straight to the point. I love it. :D!

I so loved this, can't wait for more

Dan is just so beautiful

oooow.
damn.
=.=
dont you just hate that?

Blahh. Cockblock. ) :

That was great. I love your stories. Especially the ones before this one. I'm pretty sure that I am in for a treat with this new one. Keep writing, you have an inspiring talent that you will go far with. Don't be afraid to take chances, if you don't you won't get anywhere. :)

-squeals-
I SO FUCKING ESITEDDDD!
:DDDDD
x3

Nawh, Dannnnn :3
Don't get cold feet now. (;
Jeremy's a cocky little bastard, now isn't he? ;P

Hehe i love this already!
See, Nate and Ash are good for something ;) haha i love those two...
I hope i grow to love Dan and Jeremy just as much :D

More soon please?