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  • EmptyInside

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    it was a great read.
    October 16th, 2011 at 01:00pm
  • Undead Angel

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    I just found this once again and read it all in one day. This was freaking fantastic! It even made me cry a few times. Such an amazing idea, I simply love love love how you did this. Definitely one of my favorite stories on here. <3
    August 31st, 2011 at 11:59am
  • DracKiller12

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    Best Jimmy story i have read so far.
    January 11th, 2011 at 03:02am
  • Crash Thrusts.

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    That was a beautiful ending. I cried when Jimmy was saying his goodbye. <3
    It was wonderful. I loved it.
    December 29th, 2010 at 07:04pm
  • it's H A Y L E Y !

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    Oh. My. God.
    That was amazing! I laughed, I cried, I absolutely loved it. I thought that it was a fantastic tribute to Jimmy.
    Well done for writing such an amazing story.
    December 29th, 2010 at 12:58am
  • justhannah;

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    My god...This story was fucking amazing.
    I cried through the entire thing. The way you wrote it made me believe that we the readers were actually with A7X. You nailed their personalities while a lot of fanfiction authors can't.

    Good job. <3
    December 28th, 2010 at 06:42pm
  • Becka Vengeance

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    I just cried all the way through the last chapter, I swear. the story has been great, you truly are an amazing writer.
    December 28th, 2010 at 08:30am
  • Zakuhree Jaymz

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    okay, so I'll be honest, I've been stalking this story for a while and I haven't commented once.
    But I feel the need to now! First off let me just say that this story is truly original and amazing. The characterization is great and I like how it really isn't the cliche it could be.
    I do need to say this though, I'm almost to the point of saying fuck Zachary, Jess needs to off herself and be with Jimmy. And its so weird cause I'm a Vengeance girl through and through but gawd, this past chapter seriously put the last nail in the coffin for me wanting it to be her and Jimmy.
    I'm going to stop rambling now and let you get on with your life. :D
    December 27th, 2010 at 04:05am
  • Undead Angel

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    Wow. I just read all of the chapters you had so far and I LOVE this story. This is so amazing!! Seriously, hands down, one of my favorite stories on here! :D
    December 27th, 2010 at 01:18am
  • youngnuseless

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    I freakin' like this story! :D I'm excited to read more ^^
    December 21st, 2010 at 08:01am
  • justhannah;

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    oh shit! god.
    This story has me hooked. It's so fucking good!
    I love the idea of soul twins. The song is beautiful too. Good jobb!
    December 20th, 2010 at 12:54am
  • DeOkIe

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    it was awesome! i want to know what's going on with jimmy and jess! ...next chapter soon :3.
    December 16th, 2010 at 05:01am
  • cat-vengeance

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    yay jess is awake!!!
    her nd zacky r so funny :)
    i love this!
    December 16th, 2010 at 04:46am
  • cat-vengeance

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    so cute nd funny!
    nd then the end!! SHIT JUST HIT THE FAN!!!
    crazy bitch!
    December 16th, 2010 at 02:05am
  • ashleeplague6661

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    WOAHHHHH. intense.
    Gena is going to get fucked up, I hope.
    and Zacky and Jess love eachother awhhhhh! I'm going to die of cuteness damn it!
    xD I can picture Brian doing that, too... oh god mental images! xD
    Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!! AHHH! I love you're writing so much!
    December 15th, 2010 at 08:57pm
  • reveress_ plegue

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    awsome realy fucking awsome
    December 14th, 2010 at 05:21am
  • cat-vengeance

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    i love the ending!!! XD
    well waxing is just to embarising! XD lol had to add that
    cant wait for more :)
    December 13th, 2010 at 07:11am
  • ashleeplague6661

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    Like I said, probably my favorite chappy so far.
    Let's hope Michelle doesn't show up at the BBQ... that won't end well if she did.
    Awhhh Brian loves Ash! :D
    December 13th, 2010 at 02:08am
  • jessica05lynn

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    Oooh I hope that Brian and Ash work things out! That just wouldn't be cool if they didn't. Also, I'm still wondering what's going on with Jimmy! =)
    December 13th, 2010 at 01:15am
  • cat-vengeance

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    comments for jess r in the bucket :D
    i loved this chapter :) it was a good one but yet they all r lol
    :D i get to see Zacky tonight on his bday :D
    ill make sure to scream happy birthday really loud for u :D lol
    December 11th, 2010 at 09:38pm