Anaesthetic Heart - Comments

Karen, since my concussion is gone and all and I can finally read your story, I'm very upset with you! :( Update now! :)Thaaanks! & thanks for the shout out!

Karennnnnnnnnnnnn. :(
Update this.

OH MY GOD, REN. :o
How dare you leave it like that!
Update, please!

So, here's the thing, you tell me to read your story and I do it..It starts off easy and then takes off in a high speed chase! I'm loving it! And your theme song? Perfect! Please update faster, I don't know how long I can wait too know what happens next! Hurry, Hurry!<3 & Keep up the amazing writing Girly:) You have many fans, including moi!

ps. I'll keep giving you shout outs in anything I write so people know where to go for an unreal writer! ;)

My God Ren, you never cease to amaze me!
I can't believe you wrote something so dramatic.
Please girl, update soon. <3
I need to know what happens.

This is amazing. You did a great job continueing on, and I really wish you would just tell me what's happened instead of this dreadful waiting. :( <3

Two scratches and a compliment, fine so far with me. (:

i love this story!

Agreed, Darling.
Scratch and start again.
You've been waiting far too long.

Scratch & Start Again!

^ Then as soon as i get my documents from my destroyed laptop, you're in for a big treat! (:

Great update! I loved it! I love how you don't make your stories predictable. I'm always surprised ;)

^ Thank y'all for your comments. ily, <3

i love this chapter!!!!!!!! haha, it is soooo good! i love the way u introduce the characters ! update often!

You're far too cute not to update! :)
- puppy dog face - Please get on it?

I really love this. the only problem, when she says yeah... she says yah and that buggs me, SOO much. could you change it to yeah? :p youve earned a subscriber.

i agree with Laura.
i love the nice, easy, casual style in which you write. you're a great writer! keep it up!!

I have offically fallen in love with not only this story, but the style in which you write it. It has a very addictive format and the story draws you in from the very start. On the other hand, it's layout is... Not suited to the story. The layout you have given it, plus the front cover picture have a glitter-glamorous big city feel... And I just don't think that suits...? I don't know. The layout was very beauiful though.
I have subscribed! :D