I kinda agree with everyone, I think the whole "alien" thing was just horrible. But, the story is amazing and I'd cry if you stopped, so, please don't. <3
To be honest, I thought this story was really freaking good! You were completely right with what I thought about the alien thing. I was a bit mad about it and totally wanted to stop reading right there. But then I was like, "Well, let's see where this is going." I don't like the bit about aliens, but I DO like this story. So I won't stop reading. Not yet, anyway. I'm curious about what you're going to do. Hope to read more!
I love David Tennant. And Doctor Who so when I read that I smiled. It also reminded me that I missed the christmas special. Anyway. Evie is just accident prone isn't she. I think we should wrap her in bubble wrap.
Omg! I can't believe she was attacked!!!.... Well I guess I can! But what's gonna happen to her? Where's her knight in shining armor? A.K.A Mr. V???? I love the suspense!!!! Good job!
I really like this. :) I especially loved the first paragraph of the last chapter; 'I already married him! How much more of a whore can I get?' It made me laugh. :) Keep it up!