Piper June. - Comments

I wanna slap both Piper & Ezra... Oi I finally caught up to the present chapter... I can't wait for the next update! :)

First off, I love the story Abbie. You are doing such a great job at writing this and I love every bit of it.

But I'm upset with Piper because she should have been using her head, always keep your wits about you at a party she's lucky Pierre had enough balls to make sure she's safe. And Ezra's just a stupid twat, he should have gone after her instead of getting in his feelings. And it's about time Quinn shows that he cares about Jude. I just don't even wanna acknowledge the desperate mess Jenny is.

xx

I love the story so far! I can't believe that he did that! I wish she got with Pierre, he is so much better for her than Ezra!

Crying because Ezra and Jenny just ruined it and Pierre is a sweetie atm.

oh.
well.
snap.
that was....
something!
impressive writing as ever
and I do enjoy the layout, very cute and adds a new feel to it- like a refresher all over again. i like it!
well this is... going... further than i expected, with piper's character transformation. from one extreme to another! i'm curious to see how this comes about. so glad you updated and i can't wait for more

Well that just pisses me off. I can't believe Piper changed herself so much for ducking Ezra. Why do I have a feeling Ezra either really does love her? Or maybe he really doesn't give a shit? I don't know but I hope you update soon! :D

oh. my. god.

BIGGEST FUCKING PLOT TWIST EVER!!!!!!!! HOW THE FUCK DID ANY OF THIS EVEN HAPPEN?!?!?!? Firstly, I wasn't expecting Quinn to actually care about Jude, so that was huge thing. Like he actually cares about her????? that was a plot twist. And then the whole ending part with Ezra and Piper??? I mean, I know alcohol makes you become a different person, but daaayummm shit got cray there at the end!!!!!

GAH IM SO EXCITED TO READ WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT!!!

Hurrrrry!

OMG UPDATE OMG HAHA EZRA'S GOT IT SO BAD
BUT HE'S A LIL SHIT FOR IGNORING HER FOR THAT SLUT JENNY
omg i can't i wanna see what happens my patience

YEAH EZRA
PJ'S GOT THE PRETTIEST SMILE EVER SO UR LIL SHIT SOUL SHOULD NOT BE USING HER FOR A BET
jenny ur a bigger shit so pls leave already okay
my girl PJ is in the house now
WOW
JENNY
ALL I WANNA SAY IS R U DUMB?
have you not met PJ
hell, have you not SEEN PJ?
OOOOOOH HOT DAMN YOU GO PJ
and Ezra idek what to say to u
that kiss better have not been the bet speaking

Ugh I absolutely adore this story. It's been a while since I've read something and I actually care about the characters. Divine work, darling :)

Come back T___T bring my love birds back. Things aren't the same!

PS what happened with the last chapter with Piper and Ezra at the party? Brilliant scene! D:

Finally I was so happy when i finished this chapter, i'm just a little worried about that bet Ezra and Quinn had, is it still on? i hope not, i want to be together for real. please keep updating.

Okay I'm back to finish commenting! I'm so glad you put this one up to comment swap because it's such a great story! If this were a book in print, it'd be one I'd certainly buy!

Your characters and how you've molded them is perfect. I'm liking Ezra more and more with each chapter. His relationship with Eliza is great, and I think it adds a side and dynamic to him that we the readers see, but the other characters may not. Ezra is like the perfect tragedy.

I loved him walking her home! So cute! Their whole relationship is cute yet a potential disaster! I love it! I think it's good how Piper is coming out of her shell! But I don't want her to get hurt because she is so relatable and loveable. The mathletes was a great thing you added! Chapter 8 is too adorable!

And the line "'Let's not talk about the past, June. That's how you get stuck.'" Is brilliant!

Chapter 10 broke my heart! I teared up as Piper cried!

Chapter 11 make me go "aww!" on a couple occasions!

And oh my gosh!! Chapter 15! Best chapter yet!!

I don't want Piper changing who she is, and I don't want Ezra to be doing all this just because of the bet! I don't like Quinn! Ugh. No. That's all I'll say about him! And Jenny? Nope. Don't like her either! 15 was so steamy and I liked it! Haha

I'm sorry if my comment is all jumbled! It's just such a good story!

You are a great writer! I can't believe I haven't read this before now! You've got an uncanny ability to create a perfect picture; the story takes a shape of something more than just words. I totally love this story! I subscribed and recommended it! Thank you for putting this up to swap!

I just finished chapter 5 and wanted to comment real quick! I'll come back and comment more when I finish! (Which I plan on doing!)

I was instantly hooked, and couldn't wait to read more. I love your characters so much! I can totally relate to Piper and I love her personality. The tragedy of the abuse she suffers is so sad yet develops her character even more.

I love Ezra in a weird way! I know he's pretty wild and a "bad boy" but I feel for him! His bluntness is genius!

I love the plot and how things are coming along. It's not all happening too fast, but it's still going at a good pace. The tutoring aspect between Piper and Ezra is great! The bet is gonna be a good plot device I think! Looking forward to seeing how that relationship plays out! I can't wait to finish reading this and I promise I'll come and comment again! Definitely subscribing to this; it's the perfect kind of story I like to read!

EZRA U SUCK OK
omg Jenny why you gotta be so obsessive
leave pls
what the fuck Ezra
why you callin her baby girl
don't be a toolshed
nuh uh
my home-g Piper can do 31485709234857109328x better than u so u better push it push it to the limit limit ok
O ELSE THE WEASTIES BE COMIN' AFTER U

BUT HAHAHAHAHAHA U GO PIPER I'M PROUD OF UUUUU~~

OMG perfect!!!! And can I just say that I love how piper grew a pair and got whats hers without overdoing it and still keeping her innocent personality? She is perfect, Ezra's a fucking god and this story is just brilliant

Holy fuck.

I don't know whether or not I should throttle Piper or if I should just jump off a cliff. Why is this happening. Ezra's being a lil shithead and winning major points for being so damn concerned and jealous and possessive and it's literally hurting my heart because there's that whole fucking bet that's going on and he's going to punch himself in the face over it and I'm just sitting over here like, "PIPER IM HAPPY FOR U GURL BUT U NEED TO GET IT TOGETHER!!!!! A HOT BOY DOESNT RANDOMLY START TALKING AND OBSESSING OVER A GIRL FOR NO REASON GOSH DANG IT!!!!"

Oh and can I just say this part made my insides tingle?

"Piper," he sighs quietly. "I - " He presses kisses to her temple as they lean against the wall, fervent and quiet and soft as he starts mumbling a bunch of sweet nothings. Well, they're his brand of sweet nothings, anyway. "You drive me crazy, Piper. Don't you know that? It's you. Forget Jenny, okay? I want you. And to be honest, I don't give a fuck if he wants to bend you backwards and leave you so tuckered out that you won't be able to walk for a week straight, 'cause you're mine baby girl, and he can shoot me all the dirty looks he wants 'cause you belong with me, not him. I found you first, and I'm not going to stand here and let him put his hands all over you. Sorry, PJ. It's just not happening. You're my shining star, don't you know?"

Ezra kisses her then, but it's not quiet or gentle or sweet or loving or anything. It's real, it's raw, it's rushed, it's needy, and it makes her feel like all that matters right now is his lips travelling to her neck and leaving a mark that's not going to fade for quite some time, his fingers digging into her hips hard enough to bruise and her name falling from his lips like a prayer, Piper, Piper, Piper, you're mine, tell me you're all mine - "

Like holy fuck. You're such an amazing writer. You can feel the mood of the situation and I love it. I'm so happy for the two of them, but at the same time I know how this ends. Heartbreak is coming faster than they imagined, and I'm not ready for it. Ezra, you fucked up. Piper, you're going to regret meeting hot boy. Jude, you should've told Piper from the very beginning what was happening. "best friend" my ass right now. Quinn, I still don't like you. Maggie, I understand you wanna help, but you know how this is going to end. And that's awful that you're helping. And Jenny, getchyo ass out of the picture. EZRA CLEARLY STATED HE DONT WANT YOU, SO GET YOUR TRIFLING ASS OUT OF HERE.

Why do I get this feeling that Piper is going to spin out of control and Jenny is always going to be in the picture??

Fuuuuuuck.

Update soon, pls bby ^_^

Made my heart melt. I hope he really means it with her and they start to date. I hope he saves her from her jackass dad. I hope he finds out and takes her away from that house. Please update soon. Your story is amazing!

OOF! you had me worried when you didn't update! Seriously, one of my favorite stories at the moment!
I REALLY LOVE THIS CHAPTER LIKE MUCHOOOo!
I want a drug free Ezra in my life <3 (minus the bet stuff of course)