Piper June. - Comments

THIS RIGHT HERE.
THIS ROGHT HERE IS GOUNG TO KILL ME.
I hate that everyone knows..
BUT WON'T SAY ANYTHING.
I'm in a serious hate/love relationship with Ezra.
I'm dying. I'm dying. Send halp, pls.
(Piper bby..)

I'm so in love with this it's ridiculous.
EZRA
AND
PIPER
ARE SO ADORABLE OH GOSH IM MELTING
idk I feel like Ezra would besmoking hot so I'm crushing on him already whoo

IM SO HORRIBLE.
I KEPT GETTING EMAILS ABOUT THE UPDATES BUT DIDN'T HAVE THE TIME TO READ THEM UNTIL NOW.
But from what I've read, I haven't missed too much.
Ezra is being his cocky, laid back self..
Pipers being her shy, "I don't know" self..
Jude is being the overprotective friend who is dating Quinn..
Yep, looks like everything is just going smoothly..
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE DRAMA TO RIP EVERYTHING APART (not)
GAH YOU'RE THE GREATEST~

AW PIPER GIRL
it's ok Ezra can take u home ;))))
uh oh ya girl Jude's catchin on' bettA WATCH IT
aw, come on, Olivia's tryin'!
omfg
the future mrs. sharman-hoechlin-o'brien de lerman stop it you think we're spoiling you YOU'RE SPOILING US OKAY

update soon!

I just can't get enough of this story. I like Olivia I feel like she genuinely wants to get closer to piper, as for Ezra I hope he makes it to the mathletes. Is the bet between Quinn and Ezra still on?? I hope not .

i'm baaaaacckkkk in your comment boooooooxxx~
okay I think the only thing I noticed was this:
Ezra walked Piper home almost every single day after that, mostly because Quinn was keeping her pretty busy. — I think "her" should be "Jude".

AND OMFG I TOTALLY FORGOT QUINN CHALLENGED EZRA TO THAT THINGYMAJIGGY WHATAHADHADAWHA that's why Jude is acting so weird right qrl PJude's dynamic is now messed up or am I just going mad probably the latter bUT OH HELL NO EZRA YOU BETTER COME CLEAN TO HER ABOUT THAT RIGHT NOW I DON'T CARE IF YOU'VE FORGOTTEN ABOUT IT BUT SHE'S GONNA FIND OUT AND YOUR ASS GONN BE WHUPPED.

Also I'm really not keen on Piper's dad coming into the picture u feel me I'm hoping the next time he does anything Olivia stumbles in and goes like "wtf husband what u doing" and Paul goes like "omg wife u weren't supposed to see this" and then Piper runs away to Jude's house lalalallalala~

wheeeere has this story been all my life? Piper is the cutest thing ever, I swear. And I really like Ezra. I love how complex all of your characters are. They all seem to have such meaning in your story.

I JUST LOVE THIS SO MUCH. You writing is just perf. The only thing I picked up was that Quinn's last name changed a few times (i might just be going crazy though) but I don't blame you because I think that you said somewhere that this is a rewrite.

But yeah... love this story to pieces! I ship Ezra and Piper (June?) so much you have no idea. I can't wait for more! You writing's amazing. (:

PIPER IS SO CUTE
AND WHAT EZRA BITCH WHY YOU AIN'T GOIN TO TUTORING
omg
future mrs. posey
but the future mrs. posey is his fiancée????? :((((
I COULD BE THE FUTURE MRS. SHARMAN OR THE FUTURE MRS. HOECHLIN OR THE FUTURE MRS. O'BRIEN OR THE FUTURE MRS. LERMAN THOUGH I MEAN WHATEVER'S FINE ;))))

oooh I can't wait to see whats going to happen with Piper and Ezra. Update soon!

K sorry to do this again but
fourth paragraph down, you write "she" all the time. Chuck a "PJ" in there for some good ole variation. omfg what am I saying sorry qrl
The people in the park didn't really pay her anymind — any mind should be separated.
she asked, looking at him inoffensively — idk "inoffensively" sounds kind of funky/out of place with the rest of your writing
second paragraph in Ezra's section — You use a lot of "he"s, too. And ooohhh, shit's gonn go down! Dammit Rose stop fuckin with peoples' stuff.

Ughughughuhg love Jude's mum (that's Jude's mum right ofc it is) and ugh love Piper's reaction to Ezra. UGH PIPER IS SO CUTE AND SHY AND I LOVE IT IF I WERE A GUY I'D SO BE LIKE "HEYYY, PIPER, HOW YOU DOIN".

I can picture Eliza just trying to kick her shoes off without unlacing them. And I dig just seeing PJude (new nickname whoo~) interact and how they interact with Maggie, and Jude's mum. And although I don't like Piper's dad, I'm kind of curious to see how he reacts to her being in Mathletes and whatnot.

Ugh what a nasty principal I don't like Clearwater can we have another episode where Ezra goes all snap my fingers in a z formation sassyboy on her pls and thank you? And n'aaaawwwwww PIPER AND EZRA, SITTING IN A TREE. I am so juvenile it's not even funny.

I really liked this chapter. I liked how we got to see a soft side of Ezra instead of this mean, don't care guy that we see at school or parties. He really does care about his sister and I really like that about his personality.

I kind-of figured that Quinn liked Jude. I just can't believe that they are actually going on a date.

Oh and happy birthday!!!

JUDE OMG NO QUINN IS AN ASHHOLEEEEEEE
DO NOT LIKE
DO NOT LIKE UGH WARNING APPROACH DICKWAD WITH CAUTION
ugh maggie ihy and ily idek what to think about u anymore
aw omg Eliza no love Ezra ok he needs it rn he's an angsty lil shit who pretends like he doesn't give a fuck lOVE HIM LIZA BE A GOOD SISTA
but HAPPY ALMOST BIRTHDAY BEE OMG UR ALMOST LEGAL AW SHIT ;))))
don't be surprised when Vic FUEGO Fuentes shows up on your doorstep with a box of Kleenex on Sunday ;)))))

So even though Ezra a total jerk, he's still a great big brother and I think that can make any girl fall in love, oh my gosh. And I like how you made the abuse between Piper and her father more there. It wasn't as evident as before, I don't think, but it's great either way haha. Bring on the next chapter, I'm waiting patiently. :)

Dude it's so weird reading this right after Tallulah because it's so different and kind of refreshing because like I always get this bad feeling when I'm reading the other story like something really nasty's gonna happen you feel me

k girl I was so confused when you wrote upstairs because I was like what is upstairs what and then I realised that Ezra lives in the basement and I totally forgot about that Go me! Also mhhmmmm, Ezra dresses nicely and omg Rose has a shit ton of stuff. And omg Ezra is so sassy "Um no think of it as commission" ha!

And ugh ugh Eliza is so cute as well and I think Ezra should just grow some balls and tell her that mommy died dammit I feel like Eliza's gonna feel some huge betrayal if/when Rose marries their dad omg. DAMMIT EZRA

Also I forgot to express my love for Piper June and I just came up with a new phrase for when I talk about Piper and Jude and that is Piper Jude so I love Piper Jude and Quinn finally asked her out hm I can't wait 'til they get to their puppy love stage (after tonnes of fights, of course) and get all cutesy and OMFG THEN PIPER FEELS LIKE THIRD WHEELY SO THEN BADABING BADABOOM BANG! EZRA SCOOTS HIS CUTE LIL BUTT ALONG AND GOES LIKE "OHEY PIPER HOW YOU DOOOIN" all Joey-like (wait okay I just realised that Joey-like is probably quite vague so Friends okay, Friends) and then BANG everyone is happy.

...and I somehow got rid of Piper's dad.

Awww this chapter is so cute, he is the best big bro ever. i hope he somehow meets piper in the park. please keep updating.

"(He knew a guy who knew a guy who knew a guy’s sister who specialized in counterfeit documents.)" this made me giggle like an idiot for some reason and Ezra is a really cute brother to Eliza

Stoked you're re-writing this, but not stoked to have to watch how the bet plays out. Poor Piper!

PJ YOU ARE AN ABSOLUTE CUTIE CAN I TAKE YOU HOME
I PROMISE I WON'T ABUSE YOU LIKE YOUR SORRY EXCUSE FOR A FATHER
and Ezra can I take him home too oh my goodness
I actually really really hate Quinn lol what a dick
well hate's a strong word so I'm just gonna go with strongly dislike

also
please excuse my grammatical bitch but when Piper and Jude are talking about Quinn and Ezra

"He's a idiot." --> he's an idiot c:

I just found this story (one of my friends recommended it to me) and I‘m so happy that they did! This story is fantastic. I love your writing style and how you are the narrator but not. (If that makes sense)

At first when I started this story I wasn’t sure if I was going to like it, but I quickly fell in love with it. Piper is so realistic and I love her shy, but strong personality. And I’m so glad that she has a friend like Jude, who will stick by her no matter what happens. Ezra is an interesting character. Defiantly not a role model or a contributing member of society, but I like him all the same. Especially loved the chapter when he mouthed off to the principal.

I adore the simple but awesome background. I wish the text was bigger though because I had to switch to the default layout to read your story.

Overall, phenomenal job and I can’t wait to read more. So PLEASE update soon!