The Demons Within the Pages - Comments

  • MusicLover747

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    and yes, I think Anna is crazy but we will have to wait to find out for sure. Finish the story please... ! :)
    July 23rd, 2012 at 03:25pm
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    and yes, I think Anna is crazy but we will have to wait to find out for sure. Finish the story please... ! :)
    July 23rd, 2012 at 03:25pm
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    Please keep going, I can't wait to read the next chapter!
    July 23rd, 2012 at 03:24pm
  • xXPinkyPieXx

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    I'm very confused. Is Anna crazy?
    July 12th, 2012 at 05:26pm
  • Jazmyne

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    Okay, so I finished everything you've written so far and I absolutely adore this story, but there are so many blanks that need filling.
    July 4th, 2012 at 01:55pm
  • danimurphy27

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    HAPPY BIRTHDAY BESTFRIEND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    July 4th, 2012 at 09:10am
  • Jazmyne

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    Brilliant story so far, I don't have time to finish all of it now, but so far it's really awesome and I'm really in love with it so update soooonnnn =)
    July 3rd, 2012 at 07:44pm
  • MusicLover747

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    Chapter 30 is great! I love how you introduced the characters. You must keep writing. You keep us all waiting for too long :) <3 it!
    July 1st, 2012 at 03:18pm
  • MusicLover747

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    This story is so consuming! I cant' wait to get to the next chapter.... I love it.
    July 1st, 2012 at 02:59pm
  • MusicLover747

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    I love this story so much! You guys need to finish it and publish it as at least a short story! I'm just in awe of your creative writing. More please!
    July 1st, 2012 at 02:41pm
  • UsedToBeCute

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    And update pleeze!!!!!!!!
    November 22nd, 2011 at 08:52pm
  • UsedToBeCute

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    I think you should make people see them by the end of the story. Like, pony and soda are real, and it turns out this girl really ISNT crazy!!! I am a genius. Hehe jk lol. But really, you should. It would make for an interesting twist
    November 22nd, 2011 at 08:51pm
  • Zareena

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    this story is really great but im confused! sum1 explain 2 mi plz!
    May 23rd, 2011 at 12:43am
  • futterwacken

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    Soda just makes me laugh. xD
    April 3rd, 2011 at 07:32pm
  • The Academy Island

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    Cool idea guys! Keep it coming!
    March 3rd, 2011 at 04:06am
  • lollipop102

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    ive only gotten to chapter 5 but i feel its imprtant to comment

    Wth! haha sry ill keep reading now
    February 12th, 2011 at 08:15pm
  • snow482

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    hello! :P Awesome story! Wait, I am the new subscriber rite? Anyways, ponyboy is adorable! Sodapop is hilarious! And the poor girl is going crazy! Or is she... Haha.
    February 7th, 2011 at 07:55am
  • futterwacken

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    Hahaha. Sodapop made me laugh out loud [literally...] at the last thing he said. Good chapter, despite Anna being a total nutjob. xD
    February 6th, 2011 at 08:57pm
  • futterwacken

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    Yeah Anna is crazy. I'd like to know the characters of The Outsiders, but I'm that way with a lot of books, and I'm pretty sure I'd be running to a therapist if I started seeing them out of nowhere...xD
    January 30th, 2011 at 06:43pm
  • futterwacken

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    Oh dear...xD
    January 21st, 2011 at 03:36am