After reading the summary i got really interested to read it.After I read chapter 1, I was like DANG! this story is going to be good. Hope you update soon please.
I can only say one thing: WOW! This is really amazing, quite refreshing after reading all those stories based on famous people... It really does remind me of those thriller / mystery novels I like to read. I got hooked after reading the first paragraph. you really know how to get the reader's attention :) A great story and I can't wait to read more ;)
This is unique. I've never heard of anyone doing such a thing. In fact, it quite reminds me of all the mysteries that I have sitting on my bookshelf. It makes me think that I'm actually holding a paperback book in my hands, flipping pages instead of scrolling down a computer screen. You've got such a way with words, and I'm interested to see where you'll go with this.
After reading your description, I actually got really excited to read it. It's such a unique concept and it really intrigued me.
I really like the way you tell the story from the detectives prospective and begin it after the 13th death. It seems better that way. When I got to the paragraph about the smell of dead bodies, I was actually cringing away from my computer screen imagining it. So, kudos to you for illiciting emotion.
You are really clever and this is just...gahhhh, great. I've subscribed!
November 29th, 2010 at 08:50am
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