Absolute. - Comments

I liked this :) Like, one could only imagine the look on his and his wife's face. (;
I'm sure they'd both be devastated.
This was well written. And, you have a lovely way with words, like I said before <3

That man is horrible.

Despite the fact that my face was red the entire time I read this, I really did enjoy reading it. I feel all the details you included about that horrible man were the perfect build-up, the perfect trigger for her sending the note to his wife. I also really like how tastefully she told the other woman. Roses? Gorgeous. Beauty with thorns, hehe.<3

This was really, really nice. :)
I wasn't confused one bit; well, maybe as to why someone as lovley as she would be with someone like that, aha. Really amazing read.<3

This made me blush too (replied to your author note).
The way he keeps calling her darling kind of creeps me out. But the end was very satisfying. My eyes just bulged out when I saw those two words. Epic!

The summary is cool. It's the definition, right? That's a good way to hook someone in, nice. :D

Wow. I was so hooked that I read it straight to the end. This is a really original story. The ending was awesome! I felt really bad for Elizabeth throughout the entire story, except the ending. Way to go, Bethy. :P

Overall, great story! Good luck with the contest! :D

This was so good! It was an interesting read that left me on the edge of my seat. Throughout the whole thing, I was wondering what she was going to do to William, if anything. The way it ended had me cheering for her, big time!

Amazing work!!!

First of all, I love the summary. I absolutely adore any definitions (call me Word-Nerd). <3

First of all, I felt like I was reading a Soap Opera - but I liked it. :)
I felt really bad for Elizabeth, all the way until the end.
At the end, I was happy for her. To say the least, my dad was a little confused when I shouted, "YOU GO, GIRL!!!" from across the room. Eh. ^^'

“Yes I would like to send some flowers out. Roses and they need to be red. Use a very elegant vase, and tie some ribbons upon it. I would like a note card to sent with it; written in cursive.” I commanded in a very smooth voice.

“Alright, what would you like on it?”

“William cheated."

^ I really like the way you wrote the ending. I got the strong feeling from the first paragraph that I quoted that she was ready to take control of her future, and that she wasn't going quietly. :D

Overall, I enjoyed Absolute, and I wish you the very best of luck in the contest. You did a great job with this piece! :)

This was really good. You made the scene horrible, as it's supposed to be. I loved how you finished it, certainly made a good ending for her.
In all, great story and good luck in the contest. :) <3

That was really good and tugged at my emotions. Poor Beth, that was horrible but what she did in the end was devious; definitely made me smile and cheer for her. Great story!

I don't believe I have ever read anything quite like this, but it was good. Very good. Are you going to continue?