You're Electric - Comments

I luff this!!! i wish yew had continued it though.. *saddened face* but you're an amazing writer and i hope inspiration sparks some time down the road <3

I just kinda maybe loved this:D
I think you should turn this into a full-fledged story:D

Please continueeeee!

Hjuhfiajhsdfadgka you aren't thinking about deleting this are you? It's so good!
I hope you get something to inspire you <3
Good luck!!

I LOVE THIS.
It's addicting. c:

Well, you dive right in, don't you? ::D

I really like it so far, and I'm interested in how chapter two will start. Definately subscribing.,

I LOVE THIS.
<3

MOAR PLZ.
no really. this is really good so far, i really hope you write more.

ahhhhh pleasee write more? There isn't enough the maine slash out there.
:)

OHMYGOD, hell yeah i want more. d:
i like the maine's music, but i don't know the band members well at all (i don't know any artists well at all, actually), but i loved this. :3
oh, and i love the layout+banner. they look amazing. [x
idk what else to say, i'm sorry. i think everything's been said above. /:
erm. so... more soon? D:

I'm usually not big on slash, but I really enjoyed this. I love the mixture of emotions involved and the way that every band member ends up being involved with Garrett's secret infatuation with John. I also really loved the way that you introduced the story with them performing on stage and then slowly built up to Garrett's feelings for John. I felt like the entire flow of this was really spot on. Of course, my favorite part would have to be the ending because of the cliffhanger and just the sudden impulse of the kiss. Even though I'm not a fan of The Maine, I feel like that action was very uncharacteristic of Garrett and that John has that sort of effect on him and it all built up to that.

I would have to disagree with most of the comments above me; I definitely prefer this as a oneshot. I feel like the ending was perfect, and because it's so open, it leaves more opportunities for the reader to interpret and try to think for themselves what happens next.

This can DEFINITELY go somewhere, so make it love. I love your grammar and spelling, and I love the twist on the story. First one like this so far. <3 Its amazing lovely.

DUN DUN DUN
Wow, suspence.
I want to know what happens next! Don't leave it in a cliffhanger like that. You should update... like now. :D

MORE.
No seriously
This is so good.
Garrett's my favorite, and the fact that you're writing a story about him and John makes it awesomer.
So yeah.
Moar?
Update soon <3

You have been added:)

Hello!
Thank you so much for the layout. And ofcourse, the layout may be shown as an example:D
I'll be sure to add you to the authors:)
-MichelleMorbid