This is an amazing story. This, to me, is about getting insight into a boys life where he has to look after someone like Kellen, with major illness like that, but also has romance and a great relationship thrown into it. If this was to ever become a published novel, I would buy this and read over this a million times. If something makes me laugh, huff and cry, then it is sheer gold. And this has made me laugh, huff and cry. So, keep this up, dont ever think about stopping the posting, or I shall have to cry. I love this. I would rate this a ten out of ten already. You are giving everyone the perfect insight of someone who is looking after someone like Kellen and I am pretty sure that no one can do a better job that you. And, well done for having the first slash story on Mibba that I have read, which has no written sex, and isnt based on sex or their sexual lives. Haha. And, BTW, by talking about Perth, do you mean Perth in Western Australia, Australia? Because I used to live about an hours drive away from Perth :) But I now live in NSW. Hit me back, just a chat. Sincerely yours, this is Stan. -Insert gangsta pout face with crossed arms and slouched standing position, now- :)
I love Brayden.<3 He's the sweetest thing on the planet.<3 I love this so much. It's so much more than just a slashy fic. It's actually meaningful. And I love you.<3
I'm crying right now, this chapter was hard to read so I can understand how hard it was for you to write, but I really do hope you keep it up, I really do love it
Oh my.....Wow! I have never ever read something like this before! This is great!! You are dealing with the topic of epilepsy so well....the way you write the scenes where Kellen is having seizures are so powerful and intense..They are so vivid.I can see them happening right in front of me and feel what Chance feels especially the seizure he had in the last chapter...
I admire the fact you are writing from a personal experience and the things you have wrote are personal to you. It shows in your writing and makes it ten times more emotional and intense...It's tough writing from personal experience but you are doing it well....
I also really love the way you are portraying the relationships in this story..Chance and Brayden are so cute together and the relationship that Chance has with Kellen is so tight and strong!!
I only just found this fic but I'm subscribing and can't wait for more.I think the length of my comment shows this....I'm not usually one to leave long comments even if I love the fic but this is good! Keep up the good work
You are an amazing writer, don't ever think you aren't. And I admire you greatly for writing this out even when its personal. It takes so much strength and so much heart to write what you have written. It literally choked me up. It made my throat clench, my stomach turn and my eyes water as I desperately tried to keep the tears at bay. I know someone that deals with this and god it is just so hard, and the seizures are just so vivid. Brings back memories I try to keep down, I suppose you write this because its better to remember than forget and its better to live out the pain than keep it bottled up. I admire you greatly, and I love your writing.
well i fucking love this one personally. you're a fantastic writer. I almost want to say "poor [insert character]" but that sounds so...cheesy. Because it's more than that, y'know? You're very talented.