March 20th, 2012 at 07:44am
Secret - Comments
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You should totally make this into a full story. It's amazing. :)September 22nd, 2011 at 04:29am
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Oh I didn't expect that ending. I loved it! :]May 1st, 2011 at 04:40pm
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Wow I absolutely love this oneshot.
I mean Brian using his best friends' feelings for him against her and just using her is just down right wrong.
And did he really expect her to be there when "his tramp slut of a wife" gave birth to a boy, after he left her for Michelle?????
You should really make a sequel, I would love to see the look on Brian's face when he finds out that he got his best friend pregnant!!!!!
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING ONESHOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDApril 20th, 2011 at 12:54am -
You my dear are an amazing writer! I loved this.
<3December 29th, 2010 at 04:17pm -
U should do a story its really good :)December 1st, 2010 at 03:15am
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omjc i love this!
there should totally be another part
hell even a story =)November 28th, 2010 at 09:11am -
oh my god. this, is one of the most beautiful writings I've ever read. How did you get so good at it? it's truly amazing.November 27th, 2010 at 01:16pm
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P.I.C! That made me so saaaad
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But I loved it! Such a fantastic writer you are.
I want there too be another part so bbaaaaadddddNovember 25th, 2010 at 01:01am -
holy crap, you seriously never stop amazing me with your stories. this, this brought tears to my face. i not even lying when i say that you are my favorite writer on mibba. asjdghdjhfgdj please DONT ever stop writing. <3November 25th, 2010 at 01:01am
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FUTURE WIFEY IT'S AMAZING.
Bri would never do that to you. Partially because we gon' kill Mislut Dibeniwhoro, but because he's gonna love you.<3
JUST LIKE I DO <3November 25th, 2010 at 12:52am -
...bad Brian...just makes me want to slap him. Absolutely loved the way you wrote it. And there is nothing wrong with short one shots either. This is one of the best ones I've read, long or short.November 25th, 2010 at 12:52am
I'd love to see this as a full length story (:
It has all fo the potential to be so :)
Good work I love it <3