Experiment - Comments

I'm with Unexpected. Will you PLEEEAAASSEE just write ONE more chapter where they're olderish (like freshman or sophomores) and they're goin' like hard core?

you should do a sequel- when they're older and in highschool. lol.

Good thing I already rented out my condo in Hell *sips juicebox, watches the kiddies play . . . in a van with shotacon on the passenger seat* ahhh I'm never going to be able to look at little boys the same way again.
That was epic. And sexy. And the ending was all adorable x3

Hell has some of the craziest parties. When we get there we can literally say that we have a hangover from Hell.
I liked the ending it was cute.

if we're going to hell and you're coming with...
whens this train leavin'?

WHAT.
It can't be the end!!!!! :'c

IT'S OVER?
Nooooooooo D:
But... I wanted to go to Candy Mountain when I died.
Sucks for me I guess.

Haa. Yay for happy endings!
We both know I was going to hell anyways :P

awwww. :3
that was an adorable ending. yay! :D
HAHA, i wanna go to neverland too. :p

^That's the spirit!

Aww(:
Young love<3
adorable!(:
Not hell!
Neverrrr!
Bitch when I die I'm going to Neverland!!

I'll gladly see you in hell :)
I'm sad it's over but I loved the ending

aww short but cute :3

Hahaha! Lol'ed at Glitter's comment. But anywho, I just finished chapter five and I'm loving it! Hahaha.

^ There's one teenage boy.

oh damn, is the next chapter the last? 'cause i just found this. xD
it seems i've joined the club of teenage mibban girls ('cause i'm pretty sure it's all teenage girls here) who have a pedophiliac obsession with little gay boys. hmm. well, whatever. :p
is it wrong that i've been hoping for more than just kissing and hip-groping, if you get my drift? ¬.¬
anyway, i'm glad trey stood up for himself. 'cause without that little push danny would probably never confess his feelings, hahah.
so yeah. danny needs to tell trey he loves him. i hope he doesn't blow it.
and... they can live happily ever after! hehe. :3
can't wait for the next chapter. x]

So happy that there will be a happy ending.

I like the way that each chapter is so well-planned. They are all certainly short, but that doesn't mean that you don't put a lot of emotion into each chapter. Because you do. That is what I really love about this story. Each chapter has so much detail, and you can see it all clearly.

And I love the strange links that you leave on several chapters. Just saying. I found this story today, and the links make me laugh every time I see them.

Your characters are definitely developing into stronger characters. They have personalities, and I like the way that you depict how they feel for each other. I can tell that there is more to the story than the readers know, but it's a good feeling. Just a feeling that the characters are hiding themselves and the way that they feel for each other. I'm so glad that Trey has finally said something in the last chapter.

I love both of the characters, and you have got me addicted to this story. I hope that you will update soon. Great job!

Wow Trey is standing up to Danny and told him he loved him. I'm proud. XD
Come on Danny say I Love You write back! You can do it! \
Darn those parents and there hug blocking powers! Should have committed a hug and run on Trey.

I love you too (: Why do you love me?

AT LEAST HE ADDMITTED IT TO HIMSELF.
That's the first step :P
Next he admits it to Trey and then...
I don't know what then but it's probably a good thing.