If These Walls Could Talk - Comments

  • whiskey lullaby.

    whiskey lullaby. (100)

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    This story grabbed onto me the very same way Cade grabbed onto Savannah to pull her out of the closet and it just.would.not.let.go. It was heartbreaking, but wonderful. Well done!
    November 25th, 2010 at 06:46am
  • howul

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    This made me feel bad for Savannah in her situation, which is really good
    because you rose that emotion from me. You wrote this very well, it didn't
    feel like a fake situation. And I wonder what Cade is like whenever he isn't
    drunk. Wonderful job!
    November 25th, 2010 at 03:31am