August 20th, 2011 at 06:02am
wow, okay. wow.
there were a few typos here and there - like i think i saw 'him/he' instead of 'you' twice. did you like, switch from third-person to second-person? 'cause it sounds really good in second-person; you made the right choice. :3
but other than that, yeah. just wow.
that was scary, lol.
i wonder what it'd be like to have a nightmare like that. :o
...ahem. but yeah. this was really well-written. x]
<3 Haven