So, uhm, I kind of love this story. Also, I feel like a total idiot. Right before I commented, I read this story for the umpteenth time, and just now got the BTR references. I even watch the show. Regularly
Anywhoooo, the layout is simply fabulous. I love how simple the grey is, and I really like the rainbow footprints. They kind of bring it all together. I really didn't find any problems with the story. I love your writing style, and your imagery use is great. I think you did a great job, and should continue writing, because you have a great talent. :D
Awe Kandi! This was serious so freakin' cute. I think I was "awe"ing through the entire thing. Your descriptions were spot-on, and so wonderful--I love that I can picture everything perfectly in my mind as I read. Once again, you amaze me.
Oh my gosh, Kandi, I can't even. I can't believe you used the whole "Kandi is Casey's mom, plus Logan is her step-dad" thing and ohmygosh thank you so much.
This is so like me - unicorns, SpongeBob, asdfghjkl; I have no words right now.
"Occasionally a flash would snap them out of their trance, but Casey was used to the people taking pictures by now. Her parents said it was because she was so pretty and everyone wanted to see her." = pure gold.
Kandi, there is no emoticon that captures the way I feel right now. So hold on - let me look at myfacewhen.com and see if there's something that resembles the way I looked when I read this.
Also, I feel like a total idiot. Right before I commented, I read this story for the umpteenth time, and just now got the BTR references. I even watch the show. Regularly
Anywhoooo, the layout is simply fabulous. I love how simple the grey is, and I really like the rainbow footprints. They kind of bring it all together. I really didn't find any problems with the story. I love your writing style, and your imagery use is great. I think you did a great job, and should continue writing, because you have a great talent. :D