The Sun and The King - Comments

This is really creative, can't wait to see more of it.
I feel kinda bad for King (interesting name btw) as he's hopelessly in love with her.
Keep going <3

Poor King. So much for the fading drama!

this is really good :] King is adorable but i'm interested in what happens with Sun :] you have a few typos too <3

Gah! I love this, really. It's amazing.
The title was what caught my eye. It's great.
and, yeah. Just keep it up and I'll keep reading :)

Okay, I know I'm probably not supposed to, but the way I picture this Mason character is EXTREMELY attractive. I'm thinking it's the name. The weird thing is I know a guy named Mason and I don't find him attractive at all.
But anyways.
I like this so far. It's sort of nice to have the girl be the whore for a change. That sounds weird. But it seems like in stories there's always the badboy/manwhore type and the little innocent girl with no friends... This is changing it up. I like that. Looking foreword to more. (:

Hm...it looks fascinating. I am intrigued at how this will turn out.
Update soon, plz.

I already like it.
The title is what caught my attention, which I have to say is really clever.
Looking forward to what's to come.
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