Women of Anarchy: Never Look Back - Comments

  • babieeblue

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    what a great story so far.. please update :)
    February 25th, 2013 at 10:30pm
  • Legacey

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    I not really seem SOA but after reading your story I' tempted to watch it. I love your story it's really well thought out I'm slightly intrigued with what you're going to do next. I love you're story :)
    October 9th, 2012 at 02:07am
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    Hey there, this is for the comment swap and everything~
    I don't usually read stories without layouts [the generic is too wide for my taste, I won't even read big books], and I know it's allowed in some books, but I noticed you don't add a coma after someone finishes speaking. "Such as," is usually preferred over "Such as" that's all. That's my main criticism, seeing as a few spelling mistakes are allowed- we all make them, haha
    But other than those technicalities, I like your style of writing: it's quite delightful. The story line tossed me off a few times because so much happens in your story in so little time. I don't know if you'd rather work on summarizing pieces of it, or expounding on some more, I just didn't get to mourn his death in the first chapter as I'd have liked [wow that sounds wrong]. But seriously, this plot is a ton of fun, the characters are dynamic and the scripting is intriguing and catchy.
    I don't know if you've been writing long, may seem like you're just starting out- but this is seriously a great beginning to rocket off with. This story has a lot of promise and possibility, and each chapter you just make it better! You're magnificent!
    September 30th, 2012 at 07:10am
  • Stray Cat

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    Love your story :)
    June 15th, 2012 at 12:45pm
  • Keezy Cullen

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    I Love Your Story!!!!!!! I'm a huge fan of SOA and Charlie So I Love The Direction Your Story Is Going In. Keep Up The Great Work
    November 17th, 2011 at 04:54am
  • southernbelle923

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    Seriously hopes there is another update coming. Sons is my favorite show of all time! and I loved the chapter when you used the lyrics from Best of me. That's my favorite brantley gilbert song ever [= Good story so far! I wish there were more Jax stories on here =/
    July 28th, 2011 at 04:34am
  • magmababe141

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    OMG Love the story, finally Dixie got some. Now Jax can't say that she didn't try loving him.
    July 28th, 2011 at 01:10am
  • candice

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    LOVED IT!!!!! Can't wait for more.. Wonder whats going to be said in the morning though.. Last time it didn't work out so great... If it was me i would have waited till he fell asleep then taken off so he comes after her this time.. Thanks for the update..
    July 27th, 2011 at 06:49pm
  • SouthernBelle24

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    Thanks! I'm trying to write as much as i can for this story and hoping it turns out good! Your comments let me know I'm doing something good! Thanks again! :)
    July 20th, 2011 at 09:46pm
  • magmababe141

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    I feel like I'm getting whip lash from Jax and his mood swings. Dixie should tell him that "They aren't at Burger King and he can't have it his way." Love the story!
    July 20th, 2011 at 08:25pm
  • magmababe141

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    Eric + Dixie - Jax - Tara= Trouble/Paradise
    July 16th, 2011 at 09:44pm
  • magmababe141

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    OMG YOU NEED TO UPDATE I JUST SPENT A GOOD PORTION OF MY LIFE READING YOUR STORY AND I WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE OF IT SO UPDATE FAST!!!!
    July 15th, 2011 at 08:38am
  • ThePast_IsReal

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    Aww poor girl just can't get a breake.I feel almost kinda like she was with Jason because he made her forget about Jax, but that's just me. LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. great chapter as always :). Also I LOVED the RIP for Ryan Dunn at the end his death was so sad and sudden.
    June 24th, 2011 at 05:28am
  • SouthernBelle24

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    It wont be sad for long ;) thanks for reading
    May 29th, 2011 at 04:52am
  • ThePast_IsReal

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    I liked it. Really sad though :(
    May 29th, 2011 at 03:34am
  • ThePast_IsReal

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    Aww thats so sad! I liked it, but it was sad
    May 22nd, 2011 at 05:58am
  • ThePast_IsReal

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    Aww thats sad. I liked this chapter good work :D
    May 9th, 2011 at 05:31am
  • Serenity Starr

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    can't wait for the next chapter. =] i really like it. :D
    January 4th, 2011 at 12:46am
  • ThePast_IsReal

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    I like it :). Great work
    January 3rd, 2011 at 02:14am
  • lilsyn

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    Love it can't wait for the next update
    January 2nd, 2011 at 09:07am