I not really seem SOA but after reading your story I' tempted to watch it. I love your story it's really well thought out I'm slightly intrigued with what you're going to do next. I love you're story :)
Hey there, this is for the comment swap and everything~ I don't usually read stories without layouts [the generic is too wide for my taste, I won't even read big books], and I know it's allowed in some books, but I noticed you don't add a coma after someone finishes speaking. "Such as," is usually preferred over "Such as" that's all. That's my main criticism, seeing as a few spelling mistakes are allowed- we all make them, haha But other than those technicalities, I like your style of writing: it's quite delightful. The story line tossed me off a few times because so much happens in your story in so little time. I don't know if you'd rather work on summarizing pieces of it, or expounding on some more, I just didn't get to mourn his death in the first chapter as I'd have liked [wow that sounds wrong]. But seriously, this plot is a ton of fun, the characters are dynamic and the scripting is intriguing and catchy. I don't know if you've been writing long, may seem like you're just starting out- but this is seriously a great beginning to rocket off with. This story has a lot of promise and possibility, and each chapter you just make it better! You're magnificent!
Seriously hopes there is another update coming. Sons is my favorite show of all time! and I loved the chapter when you used the lyrics from Best of me. That's my favorite brantley gilbert song ever [= Good story so far! I wish there were more Jax stories on here =/
LOVED IT!!!!! Can't wait for more.. Wonder whats going to be said in the morning though.. Last time it didn't work out so great... If it was me i would have waited till he fell asleep then taken off so he comes after her this time.. Thanks for the update..
Thanks! I'm trying to write as much as i can for this story and hoping it turns out good! Your comments let me know I'm doing something good! Thanks again! :)
I feel like I'm getting whip lash from Jax and his mood swings. Dixie should tell him that "They aren't at Burger King and he can't have it his way." Love the story!
Aww poor girl just can't get a breake.I feel almost kinda like she was with Jason because he made her forget about Jax, but that's just me. LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. great chapter as always :). Also I LOVED the RIP for Ryan Dunn at the end his death was so sad and sudden.