I forgot to subscribe to this! I'm such a loser! Going to catch up now, because I don't know how I could have forgot. I was hooked, and then wondering why no one updated. I need a new brain.
that was FANTASTIC. i can't even pick a favorite part because it's brilliant as a whole. i'm so glad that she didn't just sit back and take camille's shit and gave it back to her tenfold. i was cheering for her the whole way. it really took me by surprise to be honest considering she seems so spineless when it comes to grant... but then again we all act a bit different when we don't give two shits about the person either i suppose.
Glad you didn't die, Sam. Loved the chapter, as expected, but I've got to assume that this isn't a short story like I first thought, correct? How long do you think it's gonna stretch out to? This isn't me saying it's dragging, 'cause it's not, but I just want to know. And stuff. Happy holidays right back to you both! And Ashley is pretty much a bamf.
Haha, classic. I was having a bit of a killjoy day and this helped cheer me up a little. I am really looking forward to this poetry reading scene or more like Camille seeing Josh with Elliot. The dialogue was just amazing in this chapter and how well-rounded Elliot's character has become. I loved it all Sam and I hope you feel better soon.
Elliot really is great, isn't she? :) I think Joshua might be developing a certain something for our Elliot as well, judging by the last line. Love this. <3 x
We were about five feet from the front door, and I’d been wondering for a bit how I was going to force her into my car without attracting attention from the neighbors. -ohohjhohohohoh
“A date right in front of your girlfriend!” She grinned. “We’re ballsy.” -she's great
And I’ll admit it, for a moment I wondered what it might be like if Elliot and I were both single, if Stardust was the kind of place we’d go for a date, how it might be. -hdahheohfoeh
i don't know why that i didn't know until tonight that you guys collaberated on a story together considering you two my favorite writers here. better late than never i suppose. anyway, i like it so far. i especially rather enjoy josh's name for elliot like frosty the snow bitch. classic. hahahahaaha
Oh, how late I am. On commenting at least. :sheepish grin:
This is so adorable and having my two favourite writers write it is even better. ;)
There were so many parts that made me laugh (unless I'm crazy and just made that up) and I really like Max hahaha. Of course, nothing can make me forget about Joshy.
Oh god, college finals. Almost as bad as college papers (of which I had WAY TOO MANY this semester). I feel like, with a slight bit of work on both their parts, Grant and VP (can't remember her name all of a sudden?) would be such a great couple. Which would totally open the way for Ellie and Josh to stop being such bitches to each other and start making beautiful christmas babies. Just sayin'. :)
Grant and the Vegan Princess seriously need to be in some sort of tragic car accident. And who wouldn't like waking up to Josh's cheerful face- ridiculous sweater or not? By the way, the dialogue was awesome between Ellie and Josh.
No, I woke up to a frighteningly cheerful Santa sweater and an even more frighteningly cheerful Josh. “Up and at ‘em, my jolly little candy cane. We’ve got a big day ahead of us.” -well he must have not bruised then or he might have learned his lesson.
This is where I would talk about how much I hate Grant but you know that because you wrote him like this. So I'm going to skip that.
The banter between Ellie and Josh was excellent. It was quick and hilarious. I loved it! As stated by many others, Grant needs to gtfo. Can't wait to see what Josh has in store.
Grant is an asshole, i've come to the conclusion. He needs to GTFO kindly, please and thank you :P I wouldn't mind if a cheerful Josh Franceschi woke me up in a santa sweater - he can do that any time he likes (: Great update (: I can't wait to see what happens. <3 x