The Only Thing On My Wishlist - Comments

This chapter was all sorts of epic and was so intense. I'm going to be sad when the last chapter is posted, but all good things must come to an end as we all know. I really loved the awkward conversation with Ellliot and Josh, and the conversation with Elliot and Josh's dad was adorable. The last line formed a lump in my throat, so heart breaking, yet so good.

OOH I'M JOSH AND I AM AN IDIOT.
yeah that sounds like a plan. make her prove she doesn't want you just to have a boyfriend when you haven't done the same. oooh save her from you. oooh the one that got away. oooh let her. ooh. jesse.

great chapter all around. :)

but i don't like when you leave me all sad the end.
"I didn’t have the heart to tell him that it seemed like Elliot was very quickly going to become the one that got away. "

^i really hope that's not the case. :(

The surprise is hopefully another co-written story because you guys are amazing. I was so into the chapter that I didn't know whose it was until the end. Sam's signature all over haha.
No more JOSH?
A SEQUEL? Sorry, it just hit me lol (I think and type as one)
I wouldn't mind unless Ash brings em together and she better~ :]

OH MY GOD.
If they don't get together I will cry my eyes out.

"I sometimes think Max wishes you and me were the same person so he could date both of us!”
LMFAO.

Oh my god, in the bookstore Josh was like a child lost in the supermarket. Uhh, Josh's dad is brilliant.

I CANNOT BELIEVE THAT WAS THE LAST CHAPTER, I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH. UGH, WHY DOES THE GOOD HAVE TO END. BUT I AM PRETTY SURE MORE GOOD IS TO COME, BECAUSE IT'S YOU GUYS SO YEAAAH.

I LIKE SURPRISES. YES.

These two chapters have been amazing! Heartbreaking and crazy intense. I loved them! And I can't believe it's almost over! But I am definitely excited for this surprise! Haha.
Update again soon please!!!

Woohoo! I love surprises! I think they'll just end up being friends :)

jkajf;ksdjflj ANOTHER SURPRISE? I'm flailing.

I loved your Josh chapters, so I'm sad to hear their over! But alas... I loved this. I loved the Josh/Ellie interraction. That awkward "I don't really know whatto do" phase (although I could fix that for them......... ;]) and then Ellie with Josh's dad. So cute, :3

loved it! Can't believe the next chapter is the nd! This has been such a cute/fantastic story, as usual!

An I love surprises, especially with the two of you! Can only mean good things. ;)

This was the actual end? Are you serious? :( Well.. it was such a nice story, you guys did a great job! I just wish Josh and Elliot would've ended up together, you know :p
But yeah, it was great and so much fun reading it!
x

OMG. I read the whole 20 chapters in 3 days and if you don't write more I will die.
This story is so good!

4 words: I LOVE THIS STORY!

This is turning into a long short story (;
But I love it :D

Oh my, this chapter definitely tugged at my heart strings... maybe because I can relate to how Josh feels. The angst, the anger, the hurt... it all felt so believable, and that's a gift to be able to convey emotions like that. So, I love Lucy for beating some sense into Elliot, and I understand where Josh is coming from... but it breaks my heart that they couldn't work it out.

Lucy convinces Max to bathe.
ohh my god.

I see where Josh is coming from.. I see where they're all coming from. Uhm, I love Lucy. Yes.

Lovelovelove this.

I don't blame Josh one bit. I kinda actually dislike Elliot right now, not that I'm biased or anything. But now I just want Josh to have a sudden epiphany that makes everything okay and all that jazz, y'know?
My favorite line was when Lucy told Elliot to grow a pair. Love that girl. Sorta like a linchpin to the story, yeah?

This sounds very similar to what I'm going through. But unlike Elliot, i don't care for the guy and would be so happy if he let me go. Haha This was interesting though :]

First one? YES.
No matter how long the chapter is, it still seems short haha
THIS WAS GOOD. I saw a movie in my head and those are THE BEST. :]
I'm not sad they're not together yet. Let the frustration build. We all now the aftermath of THAT.

WUT
oh no they cannot be done D:
no fucking way
like they're so cute together c:
and elliott, well she's just an idiot for not believing josh.
like why would he do that, anyway? and so what if he did? it's not like a big deal.
anyway, i fucking love this story<3 so i'm suuuuper excited for more :'D