YOU WERE SO RIGHT I DID LOVE THIS CHAPTER. OH MY GAWWWD.
So fab. So, so fab. Thank god Grants out of the picture. And l o l poor awkward Josh. But ugh he was so cute and sweet, but WHY WOULDNT HE LET ELLIE GROPE HIM SOME MORE? COME ON JOSH. GET WITH THE PROGRAM.
I loved this, and I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter! :)
Oh win! A bit of Josh groping is always welcome! I'm so happy that she's finally got rid of that complete tosser! He was a knob. Now she can work on being all lovey with Josh because they will be together forever! Loved the update! :D <3 x
It was that moment that I realized our hands fit perfectly together and that was definitely something I didn’t want to think about. -HEHEHFHAHSHOF I enjoy this sentence
I didn’t expect him to have a copious amount of Jennifer Aniston movies. -well....
“No, no, no.” He waved me off stubbornly. “I’ve got The Exorcist, or A Christmas Story...” “I don’t care. The Exorcist?” He stared at me dumbly and all I could do was raise my eyebrows in response. “A Christmas Story it is.” -shocking as hell
“Though,” a smile formed on his lips, his cheeks a pleasant shade of red as he looked at me. “If anyone was taking advantage of anyone, it was you taking advantage of me.” My mouth dropped. “I did not.” “You practically molested me in my sleep.” He grinned. “I know I’m so ridiculously attractive, but you need to restrain yourself, Ellie.” -hehehehehehh
I felt Josh wrap his arms around me, and there was something about it that was so familiar and it made me feel safe. -cuuuuuuuuuuute
grant better be gone, never to return or I will be one salty girl. unless they want to egg him or something.
Tossing Frosty away. That was good. And can I just say that this fictional Josh is my hero? Sweetheart and self-righteous all rolled into one. Love it.
Oh wow... this has to be the highlight of my day! I'm sorry if this comment kind of sucks and lacks substance, I've been studying for a midterm and working on an essay... brains are mush.
So, I loved the banter between Josh and Elliot. The way he cares for her and how he'll do anything for her is so heartbreaking. Grant is just... argh. This chapter was just so picturesque Sam, and it flowed beautifully. I loved it all bro.
I'd like Josh wrapped in a purple wrapper when you send him to me. I don't know why it has to be purple, but whatever. Just send him over. And send me a spare in case. ;)
There was something almost... tender about this chapter, or rather, fragile. I could just feel the tension, the weakness. I could see Elliot succumbing to Josh's side, curling up. I could imagine Josh panicking in his head. I could just hear their fight. I loved it all.
Watching a girl cry is excruciating, but listening to her cry, knowing that there’s absolutely nothing you can do to make it better, that’s much, much worse. -d'aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawh
why is josh so cute? I don't understaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand.
i HATE grant. that stupid motherfucker. boy if i was elliot i would have kicked him in the balls sooooo hard for talking like that to me. and josh. UNF. he is beyond delicious. i love love love how he's portrayed in this story<3 like seriously, this story is wonderful. and both of your writing is fucking fantastic. keep up the amazing work! (: