Unveil the Sacred Order - Comments

Ah, this sounds so great. I'd really love for you to update this soon as it looks great, and I want to read more. You write well but maybe drive it a little more with the narrative rather than the speech.

I like the story, and I love Black Veil Brides. I see that it's a wile since you updated this story but I'm begging you, please update this story soon. I would like to know what happens next 'cause this looks like a pretty good story. Please ?

I like the story, and I love Black Veil Brides. I see that it's a wile since you updated this story but I'm begging you, please update this story soon. I'd like to know what happens next. Please ?

I like the story, and I love Black Veil Brides. I see that it's a wile since you updated this story but I'm begging you, please update this story soon. I'd like to know what happens next. Please ?

Love this story <3!!!!! Gonna be awesome!!!!

this sounds really interesting i can't wait for the rest

This sounds really interesting. :}
Update soon!

heyy!! umm it sounds great!! i say..ummm a girl in a band...but its up to you

This seems like it's going to be interesting...
I can't wait to see where it's going to go. =)