Child of Burning Time - Comments

Oh, my goodness! This story is wonderful! I don't think I've ever read a Dorian Gray story on here before, so I'm glad that yours is my first. It's so well written and I like how you keep to Dorian's personality.Also, I really love the name Adella. It's so pretty. But after I read the newest chapter, I'm now hooked! I didn't think there was anything wrong with Edmund. I thought he was going to be this nice, sweet guy, but I guess I was mistaken. I'm really looking forward to the next update because I'm hoping someone will come to Adella's rescue. And I'm definitely subscribing. :)

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ahaa, where are youuu Dx

please update soon <3

thought you didn't know. sorry.

ahahaahaha, where have you been?!!!?!?!? Dx

Thank you - not sure what your message comment was for. I am aware of how the site works.

I love the story so far and recently have been obsessed with Dorian Gray. Btw when you message someone you post it on their profile and not on the comment section of your story. :)

Thank you! I'm trying to make it seem realistic, but typing the way they spoke back in the day gets kind of interesting, haha

It's good, really good. You don't use modern slang like some people might. A decent Dorian story at last.

ahaha, just read it. awesomeee :)

Just for that, I have posted a new chapter. :]

Finally a story about Dorian Grayyy! xD
please keep it coming <3