I loved it. I love reading about Paul or anyone from the Twilight Saga. I'm trying to write a Paul one-shot also. :) After reading yours which are amazing by the way. I wanted to try and write one. P.S the banner is beautiful. :)
whoa! I found this story link on your profile page. I love it! It's ah-mazing! I find it miraculous that one can end a oneshot perfectly. :D I've tried and failed. lolz. Anyway, you're an amazing writer! :)
Oh wow! Look at you! ;) Sheeesh! I wish! But this is THE SHIT! You are truly an awesome writer. I can tell you put thought into it which makes it fabulous! :D You should do somemore one-shots!!