In Love with the Prince (of Darkness, That Is) - Comments

Ummm, actually, it was the title that gave it away, what else could be a prince of darkness? And while i was looking for vampire stories, I believe I found yours...even though it took a while to get to teh vampire, part, I continued to read because i like your writing skills.
Hmmm, favourite line? None. There wasn't really anything that popped out, but i did like when Taylor locked the door, then said he was serious and you're like <.< >.> OH NO!
But not really, becasue we all know we love Taylor, so...
*nods*
Sunny-Lee <3

Your read your subscribers' stories too?!?!
I'm only slightly creeped out by this.
I didn't have a favourite line, but my favourite part was when Craig told her to walk away if she didn't want to hear it, and she stayed.
Okay, my guess is Vampire.
Close? we'll see. :)
Nice update, although a bit depressing in some departments.
Sunny-Lee <3

That was quite upsetting, but I was kinda waiting for it.
I mean, their relationship climaxed and then we have Dreama's POV, and she wasn't really feeling any better about it. Although, the bracelet thing was cute, i also expected her to give it back to him, but... I mean, he gave it to her, it's still hers.
Sunny-Lee <3

No! They aren't breaking up are they? They're getting back together, right? Right? Damn, drama. But you seriously rock! And I subscribed! Go me, go me! Well GO YOU!

I am quite sure by now you have heard this, but your writing is in fact, fantastic. I am seriously in love this this story, I very posisbly could be.
Dreama and Taylor have such an interesting relationship. I was quite happy with what happened in the last chapter. Only because I am definately a giant sucker for stories like that. In other words, I look them up constantly.
Sometimes I find the transitions between chapters weak, and I have to think about it for a moment until I reason where the story has moved to. Maybe that is how you want the chapters to be, that's your thing. I am far from a good writer, believe me.

YES!!!!! I do believe that you have made my day by these few sentences: And since it has been brought to my attention that I must beg, here it goes:
PLEASE, PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS GOOD AND CREATIVE, TELL ME IF YOU LIKE THIS STORY! I WOULD POST FOUR NEW CHAPTERS IN A DAY IF I COULD JUST HAVE MORE THAN ONE PERSON'S FEEDBACK! (Not that I don't appreciate you, LovedInside!) AND THAT'S SAYING A LOT SINCE I ONLY HAVE ABOUT FIVE NEW CHAPTERS WRITTEN!
--- On second thought, tell me if you hate it, too.

That was just like the funniest thing I’ve ever made anyone do. LOL! << Me laughing.
I liked your updates though. I’m glad that they’re official though.
Here’s my issue though: Your title’s called In love with the prince (of darkness, that is) but…nothing’s happened to make him the prince of darkness, although you are hinting at something…
Anyways, I give permission for anyone to comment now. Unless we’d like to hear her beg again….
Sunny-Lee <3

You know... i kinda want you to beg for comments, so this is me telling the newest subscriber to keep their typing to themselves until she begs (possibly in the next chapter) (S)he wont listen to me, just watch.
Or maybe, (s)he wont listen to you and at the same time, listen to me.
We shall see.
Okay, now that I’m done rambling on about this new subscriber and you've noticed that i read the Author's notes at the bottom even though I've referred to them many a time, I will comment upon the story portion of your err... story.
It was fairly short, but I liked how she wouldn't give up and leave Taylor's house. It's really cute. :)
Sunny-Lee <3
P.S: Favourite line: "How's he holding up without a girl to run to?"

Dreama shrugged. "How'd you do?"

Taylor pretended to think about it for a few seconds. "Lousy. It's really hard to dance by yourself."
It was cute and sly. You know?

Favourite lines: "I have a no spoken-love policy," Gemini said, in an officious voice. "Any admissions of personal feeling will be accepted by the heartless loner before you, but it is to be assumed that they are returned, because it will never be stated."

Dreama laughed and rolled her eyes. "You're such a nerd, Gem."

AND

This is more of a filler than anything, but I figured I'd put it up now instead of disappointing my fans (okay, fan) tomorrow.

I know that one ^^^ wasn’t in the story, but I read it and laughed like extremely hard. I am proud to be fan. :)

Also, I’m so sorry your Grandoma died. Mine died when I was three from cancer too. It may be harder for you since you knew her longer, but at least you have those memories. What’s your favourite one?
Sunny-Lee <3

Favourite line: No, I'm screwing both of them," Dreama snapped sarcastically, irritated. She immediately regretted it at the look on everyone's faces.

"You slept with him?" Jesse laughed. "Both of them? I thought you said nothing happened when he spent the night here!"

"Who spent the night here? Tom, or this new guy?" Nathaniel asked.

"You slept with my sister?" Craig yelled at Thomas.

lol, it just made it exceedingly hilarious, so I laughed, even though it was probably a tense situation. Jesse's my favourite brother. *smiles*
Update soon?
Sunny-Lee <3

Favorite lines: Dreama and Lydia bonded over a mutual love of musicals, and amused themselves during intermission by comparing their favourites.
(Because you spelt it favourites, which is the Canadian way to spell it, and I’m Canadian)

AND

"Besides, how many times to you get to see something on Broadway? It's much nicer to be able to see it over and over again."
(Because musicals are my favorite, and so I have like A LOT on DVD, and video… and I like to go to New York and see some every like… 3 years. Lol)

Man, I was trying to think of where I had heard the title for that chapter from before… cause I happen to have The Phantom Of The Opera, both the old one with music and random black screens with words, and the new one where they learned how to talk, and I’ve seen the broadway musical… it was a blast, and I was singing the song in my head and I couldn’t figure it out where it came from, but lucky me, you always give title credits.

Well done! *high fives*
Sunny-Lee<3

Favorite lines: He arrived in his Chevy a few minutes later, and for the first time Dreama noticed how heavily tinted the windows were. She asked about it when she climbed in, and Taylor grinned wolfishly. "It makes me feel cool," he said.

AND

" 'This is Chicago, kid. You can't beat fresh blood on the walls'," she quoted, in a perfect imitation of Billy Flynn.

"That's a little bit scary," Jennifer laughed.

"Are you kidding? That was uncanny!" Lydia cried.

I have the movie. It is one amazing movie, I have to say. I try to immitate them all. It's like me talking the whole time, so no one likes to watch it with me unless I have gagged myself, which I never plan on doing. Also, the first line made me laugh. "It makes me feel cool," he said just because his windows were tinted. There's got to be a reason why you put that in there. I have my suspicions. ;)
I'm sorry said Colin laughed at you for your formal invitation, but said Colin obviously has SOME type of issue. Girls do not ask out guys to be laughed at.
Beautiful part my lovely *hugs*
Update soon?
Sunny-Lee <3

Favorite lines: "Don't even try to pull that. I want to know everything that was said and done."

"Aw, you should have told me. I would've brought you along."

"I'll give you a video camera next time."

"Shut up."
AND
"Oh my God."

"What?"

"My best friend's a slut."
I think I just like this Gemini girl. She says some pretty witty stuff.
Nice updates, more soon?
Sunny-Lee <3

Alright, favorite line:Jesse blushed, and Dreama saw it. "All right, enough about me. Who is she? He? It.”

He chuckled. "It's a girl, Dray.”

"Okay, then. Who is she?”

"Dreama.”
I was like "WHAT?!?! HE loves his sister?!?!" and then i read more, so it made me laugh.
I too am a hard-core romantic, so I loved your little romantic scene. Also, *pauses to think* Oh yes, I've been trying to think of the perfect proposal, i don't know why, I just can't see how the perfect 'will you marry me?' comes out. What do you think?
I am also one to yell and scream a lot, that's why i'm the bitch on one of my shared stories. :)
Nice update, more soon right?
Sunny-Lee <3

DUDE! I soooo got a chapter dedicated to me. *high fives All Full Of Lies*
Congrats on your 91% English Exam, IASP essay, 93% playing exam and 100% on your theory exam!
Next item of topic: I absolutely LOVE peanut butter and banana sandwiches… (Dray had 2 in your last chapter, just had to comment about that)
Also, congrats on your Editors Choice Award and tiny pin that you got for your poem. I'm really proud of you.
Keep up the good work!
Sunny-lee <3

How come I've never commented this? I must have read it while I was busy. Sorry.
Nice update, favourite part: Half an hour later, Gemini reached over and paused the movie. "All right. Spill it."

"What, my milk?"

Personally, I would have spilt the milk. Then laughed and made my best friend clean it up, but that's just me,
Hope you do well on your exams!
Sunny-Lee <3

I'm pretty sure I'm in love with this story.