Priceless - Comments

You write so great! Never really read drabbles, but this was a great first impression! It's very deep, and relateable! Will there be more?? very great style of writing! Job well done with it only being 180 words! It's just amazing how similar it is to myself and how I think! This is very wonderful and really pulls at my heart strings! Keep it up, would love to see more!!!

Okay, comment swap here. :) Well, when I saw the length of it, I was a little put off. Usually I find it's hard to pack enough meaning into such a short story to really have it leave a lasting impact. But boy oh boy did you prove me wrong. There's just so much emotion and love . Your writing is almost painfully graceful. It just makes you want to read slowly, and absorb every word that's written because you know that each one contributes to this mans love. Even though I didn't really understand what it was about at first, I didn't need to. It was beautiful writing, and it turned out to be about a truly beautiful thing. Great job. :)

I absolutely loved everything about this drabble. I wasn't sure what I was getting myself into when I read the summary, so I can honestly say that I was surprised to find such a sweet story. I couldn't help but smile as I read through the paragraphs, especially at the end when I finally realized what the drabble was about. In three short paragraphs, and in a little under two hundred words, you managed to bring in a whole bunch of happy emotions and it was amazing. It was, if you couldn't already tell, fantastic.

*comment swap*

I'm not usually a fan of drabbles, but the fact that you drew me in with just 180 words to this one shot (or 1st chapter) says a lot about you ability as a writer.
Your descriptions are wonderful and heartwrenching.

Great job x

This is sort but sweet. You're writing is very elegant... would you understand if i said it reminded me of the floral design you used as your background?
lol xD maybe im just weird but thats what i mean haha
I like how its very relatible (sp?), the scene you paint is very easy to understand. The description of emotion is wonderful, the reader finding themselves worried through the middle and smiling by the end.
Is there going to be more or is that the end?
I couldn't tell if this is the introduction of something or if this was all there was.
I really enjoyed it either way :)

This was a really good chapter (I assume there will be more since it’s a part 1?) Anyhow I like your style of writing, it’s both philosophical mixed with elegance. You can envision a picture of happiness in the man’s words. Even if it was short, it was well written. Keep up the great writing!

This was a really neat oneshot. You have a very descriptive writing style, and an impeccable sense of word choice; everything about this drabble was beautiful. It all seems very romantic, and the reader can really feel the emotions you're weaving with your words—nervousness, anticipation, need and want and love. It was a wonderful read.

Aw, I have to say this was so very sweet and of course priceless. I loved how you phrased this and how it's a man's mission. What a way you have described this feeling, and I'm glad to have come upon this little drabble.