I LOVE THIS STORY! I love every single moment, I love you for making this happen. YOU ARE A GENIUS! I envy you for making this, but this is freaking amazing!!!
I really, really love this story. James is so gosh-darn adorable <3 Make sure you don't switch between 1st and 3rd person. I noticed it a tiny bit in Chapter 3. Just something to watch for. But, really, I love this. Please, please keep writing. :)
OMG YES. YOU LISTENED TO ME. <3333 YESSSS. Well anyway. I loved the chapter. And I LOVED how you made James scream like a girl. And I LOVE that you had her call him "Jamesy Poo"
OMG YES. YOU LISTENED TO ME. <3333 YESSSS. Well anyway. I loved the chapter. And I LOVED how you made James scream like a girl. And I LOVE that you had her call him "Jamesy Poo"