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  • laredo.

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    Adorable. :)
    July 19th, 2011 at 10:58pm
  • reinadelaisla

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    cuuute. Lilly is adorable.
    One thing that irks me juuust the tiniest bit is how the characters lick their lips a bit too often. idk, but it seems like a really intimate, sexy gesture and idk how much of a place it has in a story with a child in it. That really is just my opinion, but everything else is really great.
    March 29th, 2011 at 03:08pm
  • Dee Flyrs Grl

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    Awee, I loved this!
    Can't wait to see exactly what happens with them in the sequel.
    Great job!
    January 28th, 2011 at 01:06am
  • ThingCalledLove

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    I was so into this! I loved the story you set up. Lilly is adorable and I've always had a soft spot of Andrew Ladd. I really loved this. It was extremely well written, and I will for sure be reading the sequel. In fact I'm subscribing right now. You have left me wanting more!
    January 5th, 2011 at 11:12pm
  • RosiePosie08

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    Love this. So happy that you are continuing with this
    January 3rd, 2011 at 12:56am
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