hmm... I like it. Sebastian is still a dick, especially when he vagina punched Carol. You're sister did that to me the other day. It hurt. (Just like her perfect nipple aim.) :( But anyway. I like how this is progressing. And did you see that it's in my sig? Yea. That's love right there. <3
dvuhiveww. I love. But FOSERIOUS, How can a name as cool as Sebastian be given to such an asshole? I'd kick that bee-atch where the sun didn't magically glow downwards. .. Idfk. ANYWAYS, Now that I'm addicted to this story, I expect updates. Or you should expect lots of horrible-tasting Spam. >:D Yeah..Thats a threat. Mhmm.
hey babe, keep the background pic, cause it's cute, but maybe make the story area a solid color. It's killin my eyes. Just a tip...you don't have to listen to me though.
your a really good writer, the characters are very real and i loved reading it look forward to the next