I just discovered this story today and I love it!!! I started to cry a little bit during chapter 10 because of what Matt did for Asher...that was just so romantic and sweet of him. Update soon<3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
eek I can't wait to find out what Asher says to Matt! I hope she trusts him, or at least starts to let herself. and I vote you start the mafia story! (:
write the mafia story (: that would be wiicked awesome!!!!! Only, can you please do paragraphs, I mean, I know in normal, paper back books it's written the way you do but separate paragraphs are just so much easier to read.
I'm really enjoying your story, which is saying something (: haha, seriously, I'm curious as to how it's going to plot out (: can't wait for the next update, despite having too, (: hehe.
This story is fucking marvelous! Honestly, this is rapidly becoming my favorite story of yours, although, my reasons why are difficult to explain. The biggest thing is that I fucking love your descriptions, especially the way you set up your scenes with such astounding imagery. For instance, I absolutely adored the part where Matt was mesmerized by Asher's singing, because 1. that's fucking romantic & 2. you described everything, down to the smallest detail. I could picture it all in my mind very clearly. And of course, I love this thing that Matt & Asher have going on. I think it's really cute how Matt is so determined, even when Asher is being a total bitch. Hah, okay, I can't blame her for being a little skeptical of his advances, but still, there's a part of me that wishes she would just forget about the past and give him a chance, cuz he's obviously changed a lot since high school. Oh, and LOL @ giving him a pity date! But yeah, man, I'm def. diggin' this story so far. & I can't wait to see what happens next!
YESSSS, another Matt story! Hah, you can count me in, darling! It's chill, though, cuz it seems like this is gonna be super exciting already, in a way that's unlike a lot of other stories out there. This isn't some stupid ass party girl & I think that's cool, considering how the A7X are notorious for that kind of shit. That difference between Matt and Asher makes it really interesting, ya know? And it's obv. really awesome that Matt saved her, though he's the one that made her life a living hell? Well, that spices things up a bit! It's cool, though, cuz it gives the story an element that a lot of others are lacking. I'm looking forward to more of this. :] *subscribes*